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Reviews for The Contract

By : TheLadyMiya
  • From jessirose85 on February 05, 2009
    That was a great chapter xxx

    I see he's slowly warming(as much as he can and won't deny) xxx

    More soon please xx
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  • From Heidi191976 on February 05, 2009
    Excellent. I look forward to reading more. I am curious about whether or not Severus is really dead. I think that Reya used polyjuice on Hooch's dead body to make her resemble Severus and somehow managed to get him out of the room so that she could save him. I hope that Severus is still alive and that he didn't die, at least not yet. I also hope that Remus stays safe and that Voldemort won't kill him.
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  • From ANON - roxie on February 04, 2009
    I'm totally into this story, can't wait for the next chapter. I really like the devious Dumbledore you have in here. Hope to read more soon!
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on February 04, 2009
    seems to me that they are very hard on her, she doesn't have a hard discion to make, they would be happy to get rid of her.

    Poor madame hooch, the underestemated him..that didn't work out to well
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  • From MeganArmida on February 04, 2009
    I love it, absolutely love it.
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  • From jessirose85 on February 03, 2009
    I hope Hermione goes back and tries to save her son and husband's life xxx

    Don't like Dumbledore in this xxx
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  • From marieve on February 03, 2009
    OMG FACKING GOD!! PLEEEASSEE UPDATE SOON!! God this is SOOOO GOOD!!!
    I'm totally hooked on your story! It's brilliant!!
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  • From sjauthor on February 03, 2009
    Oh dear. Dumbledore is almost as evil as Voldy....
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  • From Heidi191976 on February 03, 2009
    Excellent. I hope that Hermione does get released soon, even though Hooch won't be coming back. I also hope that the man that Voldemort stupified was not the real Severus and the it was someone else. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on February 01, 2009
    wow, I can't for more, I wonder what was with the fire and stuff. update soon
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on January 29, 2009
    fucking brilliant story, the drama, the sex, and oh lord that 23 chapters had me bedazzled, it is such an interesting storyline, with alot of suspence and twists and turns. I cant wait to read more, poor hermione, and poor snape, and poor dimitri, I hope the baby is ok. Update soon and keep up the great work

    Respect
    Scarlet
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  • From ANON - Amy on January 28, 2009
    Oh my gosh.
    This is amazing
    I can't wait to see what happens next.


    x
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  • From TheWinterWolf on January 28, 2009
    i love this it gets better and better all the time!!!!
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  • From ANON - KamarileSedai on January 27, 2009
    Hi there! I'm glad you updated!
    Heheh, I've always found wizards watching TV for the first time to be very amusing.
    The goblet of gods. A very cool sounding name for it! It makes sense that there would be two of them. Everything needs a balance. Who could have had the power and magic to make such a pair of cups, and how were they created. They seem something akin to the philosopher's stone. They're probably as rare and saught out as the stone too. The idea of such artifacts having a consciusness is an interesting one. Maybe by the end of the story, we'll know their intended purpose, and whether any of Voldemort and Hermione's theories are grounded in fact.
    What a jerk! Making Hermione steal information from Dumbledore like that. If anyone were to find out somehow, that would only add to the rumors that she's changed sides. I'm sure he wouldn't mind that. Why is he sending her and not someone else? And whether she likes it or not, he might end up telling that poor child he was an accident. I really wish I knew what kind of boy those two will turn out.
    See? I knew she'd want to go! No need to drag the girl where learning can be found, only hold her in place to keep her from running toward the place at full speed. Why did the villagers move? Is it something they do after a certain amount of time, or is it so they would incur no danger from the Riddles? The fire and dancing might have been meant to distract Hermione and Voldemort from the villagers' departure.
    *laughs* Has anyone been stupid enough to try poisoning Lord Voldemort? I would guess not, or he'd of mentioned it. I feel sorry for anyone who does try!
    That fire, it's sure something. What exactly is the purpose of the dance, and why does it change the fire's color? Does it have something to do with magic being put into the fire through the dancing? I saw something like that in a Tamora Pierce book. (Emmalon universe, not Tortal.) Or maybe it's the soup, or a combo of the soup and the dance? It be funny if she got pregnant from such a ritual.-Though I've gathered from Voldemort's thought that he wouldn't allow another child to be born.
    Love the smut! You're wonderful at writing it. I hope the others weren't watching, that's so wrong!
    Being able to read Voldemort's thoughts with a single touch is awesome! She might not like everything she hears, though. Is that what he dreams of, Hermione a lunatic with a cut throat?
    It will be quite an experience to know what he's thinking while they're in bed, if he's thinking at all. At least he can't read hers...that we know about! I think he'd show at least a minor reaction if he could. She better keep this little advantage to herself. A nice gift, that. And a little control over the ability would be good, if that's possible. Maybe it wears off? Life could get complicated like this. The milk thing is cute, though! What does she mean by strange?
    ...The rest of the month? Was she able to stay away because she had intentions of coming back? Why didn't it affect him? You'd think it would make him feel pain till he tried to get her back, kind of like when she was pregnant and in pain.
    Very awesome chapter!
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  • From TriniMinx on January 27, 2009
    Ahh, Voldey is so moody. LOL
    Put up no.24 soon :-)
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