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Reviews for The Contract

By : TheLadyMiya
  • From sjauthor on December 23, 2008
    *sigh* I tried not to review this chapter, as I didn't like it. I was wondering if you preferred not getting a review, rather than a negative one? Personally though, I would want to get positive as well as negative reviews. But if you'd rather not I'll shut up next time.

    I have never liked pregnancies and babies in fanfiction, and this is one reason why I don't like it. It annoys me when it's wrong. The whole breastfeeding thing here is wrong. It is not possible to produce milk 2 weeks after birth, when baby has been sucking on a bottle instead.

    A woman's body adapts to her child. Dependent on how much baby sucks, the body will produce more or less milk. Sucking on a bottle instead of mom's nipple means no milk. None. That's a bodily reaction, which I cannot imagine being different for witches, as it just doesn't make sense to produce milk when nobody takes it.

    This is also why women have milk for however long they (or baby) chose to breastfeed, be it 2 weeks or 10 years. There's a lot more to it, but I won't go into that.

    I gave birth three times and have breastfed my children for a total of 15 years all together, therefore I don't much like to read about it, especially when it's wrong.

    Maybe you could give me a warning when there are births or breastfeeding or "cute" kid moments coming up, so I can skip that? :)

    Hehe...just kidding!

    I think almost all husbands try what Voldie did, by the way. They're all curious.

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  • From Heidi191976 on December 21, 2008
    Excellent. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
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  • From marieve on December 20, 2008
    This story is absolutly amazing!! The characters are evolving, the situations go from stressful to humourous, sometimes I feel like throwing my laptop out the window because Voldemort is SUCH an ASS!! but I absolutly love this story. There's never a dull moment and I really appreciate that. The more time that goes by the more Voldemort is taking care and giving affection to Hermione..I really hope he figures out that she's his match. I feel really bad for Harry though! What's going to happen to him?! And what's giong on with Lucius? Is he crushing on Mrs. Radcliffe (??) I think Snape and her are cute together though..but I get the feeling that she might just be using him for his potions skills..anyways I adore your story and I can't wait for you to update it!!
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  • From Heidi191976 on December 18, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I think that the curse that caused Hermione to go into early labor was caused by Dumbledore since he claims to have tried twice to kill Voldemort through Hermione. If it wasn't him, then I they find out who is to blame. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on December 18, 2008
    RE: chapter eighteen

    YES! He is worried about her, which hopefully means that he is starting to have feelings for her too.

    Great story--keep up the good work!

    I'm looking forward to further installments.
    :D
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on December 18, 2008
    RE: chapters one through seventeen

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    I love this story!

    It has great passion, character development, humor, thrills (exciting bits), and other emotional triggering moments too.

    Well done--keep up the good work!
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  • From TriniMinx on December 17, 2008
    Awww, poor Hermie. What's wrong w/ her?
    I hope Sev and defends his ladywolf against icky Lucius in your story.

    I normally like Lucius. But in your story he's a right annoying brat, LOL.
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  • From sjauthor on December 17, 2008
    :O What is Dumbledore up to? He tried to kill Voldie twice through Hermione already? I assume the first time was after she had send the postcard that got the Creeves family killed. But when was the second?
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  • From ANON - Aimee on December 14, 2008
    OMG i cant wait for the next chapter i really really really am enjoying this story and you have Voldemort down pact and love how you have everything going so far
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  • From Heidi191976 on December 11, 2008
    Excellent. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - desiraes0220 on December 11, 2008
    great chapter update again soon please
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  • From TriniMinx on December 10, 2008
    Aww, poor Hermione :o(

    So if he can't love Hermione, what about the Baby? Oh and did I miss something? What's the baby's name? LOL

    Nice chapter. I liked it. Voldey's better in this one :o)
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  • From sjauthor on December 10, 2008
    Great chapter! LOVED it...
    So typical Voldemort! Finding the best way to use his child to his advantage.
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  • From TriniMinx on December 01, 2008
    Aww, poor Hermy.
    But yay she has her wand.

    Do you think he'll learn to love her?

    On a side note, yea crazy stuff in history classes. Two of my friends are history majors. One in latin american theo ther in asian...the stories they tell me on the research papers -- well, it's "special," lol.
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  • From Heidi191976 on November 30, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I can't wait to read more.
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