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Reviews for Fulfilling a Destiny

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  • From kyuubifreak on October 10, 2008
    i love this story, i hope harry hide before dumbledore find him
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  • From JocelynPayne on October 09, 2008
    This was a good chapter. I have to say that I am glad that you added me to your update notice list. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Good luck and happy writing!!
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  • From ANON - kirigirl on October 09, 2008
    I hope that Harry doesn't go with them , and that he gives them crud for trying to take him. And I hope that Wyatt and him get together soon. Can't wait for the next update! Heep up the good work.
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  • From SakuraMaxwellMinamino on October 09, 2008
    Uh Oh. You'd think Mc Gonnagall would keep her mouth shut about who bought it if she knew what old bumblebore was planning on doing to Harry. Now things get interesting. Harry better not end up in azkaban. Wonder how things will play out in the next chapter? Hope you update soon.
    Ja
    Eternity
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  • From bumblebee on October 09, 2008
    Oh no!! Harry's in trouble!
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  • From ANON - BelleBoi on October 09, 2008
    It was no problem at all. If you ever need another one let me know. Sadly I have most of the spells from the series memorized and I have all the DVD's so it won't be a problem for me to locate one if you need it.
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  • From slashslut on October 09, 2008
    oh my god, you are KILLING me!!!!! i cant WAIT for the next chapter!!!!!
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  • From RoseKelly on October 09, 2008
    good chapter with cliffie. :-)
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  • From ANON - Carolina on October 09, 2008
    As one of those awful reviewers that only reviews when she has something to say, I must point out somethings that bothered me with this chapter. Nothing big, but still it's on my mind and won't let go.

    First: The quidditch-teams you have feels wrong, especially when you consider that the Falmouth Falcons was named after the town of Falmouth where the team has it's home. Insted you could call them the San Francisco Quails ("California Quail" = Californias state bird) or San Francisco Eagles. The same should be done for Canada's Puddlemere United even if it's unknown what Puddlemere United is named after. Perhaps you could just call it Canada United or something else. I'm convinced you are full of ideas.

    Second: In the add you set the prices in diffrent currency. Why? It's a wizarding paper for the wizards and witches. Why are the price in dollars? And I have actually one more thing for you to think about that has with the houseprices to do. Why does the price for buying the house end in sikles and knuts? I have never seen someone sell a house for 2.458456,50 (Swedish Crowns). The houseprices I have seen is in even numbers. On the other hand the rental never is.

    Third: I don't think that someone that sells things (if they are cars, a house or toilettpaper) would ever say: "We at the Wizarding Real Estate were beginning to fear that no one would be interested in the property." Talk about buyers market. With that information the buyer could lower the price considerbly.

    Well...I hope you don't think I'm nagging, I only want to give you my opinions what I, as a reader, think about you work and hopefully help you evolve as a writer. This ofcours is only something for you to think about and have in mind in the feature. As always, it's the one writing who makes the final decision.
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  • From alma on October 09, 2008
    good chapter
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  • From lazycrazykitten on October 09, 2008
    Shessh Dumbles, just leave the poor guy alone! I wonder if Wyatt will be around when the Order shows up!
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  • From Ladyroo88 on October 09, 2008
    CRAP!!! OH NO!!! I can't wait more for!!!
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  • From angelkitty on October 09, 2008
    damn it just when you think he got away this happens... cant wait to see what happens next...
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  • From on October 09, 2008
    Another great chapter!
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  • From julesquires on October 09, 2008
    Damn it! NO! Oh I really want to hurt Minerva now! How dare she do that?! HArry better not get dragged back! And if he does I bet Wyatt will have something to say on the subject, especially since he knows HArry is meant to be his! Damn it! That was an evil twist!

    Still though, on the whole you write really well. I only really scan read this chapter and I didn't see many emotions or getting into depth with Harry but with a chapter where he buys a house I don't suppose that's neccessary! Gods! I can't wait for the next update! I'd like to thank you for updating today too, none of my favourite stories on any of the sites I visited today have been updated in the last two days! (And I have over 100 favourite stories!) Keep writing!
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