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Reviews for Melody

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From ANON - mariteri on September 23, 2008
    This was awesome!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 23, 2008
    I really loved this one! Would you consider continuing it?
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  • From Kristic on September 22, 2008
    First off, I'd like to start by saying that I am an avid reader of your Sev, Lucius, and Draco fictions with Hermione and that you rock complete and total face. I believe that this is the first time I've ever reviewed one of your stories . . . I know, I should be shaken and tickled with a large feather by a naked Lucius (okay, so my punishments need a little work).

    As for this story . . . YOU ARE KILLING ME!!!! You're going to leave it there?!? Would it helped if I begged a bit for it to be extended? Probably not, but I had to ask. Excellent work as always! Look forward to the next creation!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 22, 2008
    I am never going to catch up reading all your wonderful stories if you continue to bring them out at this rate (please don't stop though). I loved this especially the naughty little twist at the end when it turned out that she'd been turned on by the wrong 'instrument'. LMAO Loved it!
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  • From ANON - dark_samira on September 22, 2008
    you're so sure this is just a opneshot? No steamy-hot sequel? I love yours Lucius/Hermione.
    I love all your stories actually, but your Lucius/Hermione are just the cherry on top of the lot.
    So, pretty please, write a sequel *_*
    You know you want it

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  • From AndreaLorraine on September 21, 2008
    Loved this for many reasons...Lucius as grumpy widowed recluse, his protective reaction when Hermione reaches for him at the piano, the phrase 'a pile of silk confetti' in reference to the clothing and underthings discarded on the floor, and of course, the twist at the end. Great work as usual!
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  • From LaBibliographe on September 21, 2008
    Well, Lucius certainly got the attention he was demanding. Lucky Hermione got to go along for the ride (literally). Him telling her that the piano wasn
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  • From chelleybelle on September 21, 2008
    that was fantastic!
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  • From ladyravenna on September 21, 2008
    Ooh, I would so have Lucius against a piano. Nice twist at the end.
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  • From Gertie on September 21, 2008
    The entire time I was thinking that ol
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  • From Tenar10r on September 21, 2008
    That was great!

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  • From ANON - DaisyMaeEVans on September 21, 2008
    Love it! Great work, girl-especially the ending!

    Hugs-
    D
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  • From tarbarme on September 21, 2008
    I glad that story "came" to you. I know a very bad pun. The stories you write are a blessing to read. Please keep the stories coming.
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  • From Utopia on September 21, 2008
    Lucius plays??! Oh! Be still my beating heart!

    Andy wants a Steinway - but unless we win the lottery he's no chance! I play sax and flute - and my sax is a work of art! Its a Selma - and they're the Rolls Royce of saxes! Its simply Gorgeous! I've two flutes, one is about 30 years old and are no longer made, and the other one is a mass-produced Yamaha, though it's still lovely, but not quite as lovely as the other one.

    Does this tie in a little bit with 'Something in the way she moves'? Is this a hint to where Draco gets his musical talent from? I can almost see Lucius teaching a very little Draco like my Mum taught me. She started teaching me to read music when I was three, and by four I was pretty much 'fluent' in another language! (Though, I only read one cleff) Music is another language, and every piece is like a little holiday where you've had to take a phrase book.

    And I'm rambling on and on and it has stuff all to do with the fic!

    I can't see Lucius willingly owning a white piano; I see him as a black fan, or perhaps redwood... maybe his Gran was buying something she'd want to see in the Manor, rather than something he'd really want. The flowers painted on top don't sound too Lucius-like... though it is wonderful to know he plays it! Maybe he had his eyes closed so he didn't have to look at it! lol!

    I can't believe they did it practically on the piano! If that was Andy's piano, I'd have been shot for suggesting it! Though, I think wizarding items are much easier to polish fingerprints off.

    Why did he show her the piano, rather than the harp? Or is it just that the piano commands all attention in the room and she was drawn to it for that reason? Though, anyone looking for a 'dark instrument' isn't going to notice something "insignificant" propped up in a corner when there's something like that on full view... if you want to hide something, put it right under their noses and nobody will see it.

    Lust spell... nah, just pheromones, though the choking thing really had me squirming. I don't like violence.

    I wonder if Hermione will have to spend more time with Lucius to complete her studies... though he DOESN'T have an instrument because they're illegal *wink* so it would be all theory and no practice. *giggle*
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  • From mignonette on September 21, 2008
    This was great! You have such a marvelous "grasp" of the Lucius character. (Don't I wish I did! - in more ways than one ;) ) Wonderful as always.
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