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By : dirtydarella
  • From callistianstar on November 02, 2008
    Well in all fairness you aren't exactly writing him as a ball of fluff. You are torturing him with all these problems, and it is having the opposite effect (as it should), making us want to cuddle him. lol I couldn't stop giggling at this chapter (still giggling). That's just too sweet how Draco wanted to cook something for Harry as a thank you (he should have probably stuck with a present that worked with his actual talents). I almost died when he said he wanted to make deviled eggs, and then proceeded to crack those eggs. Boiling them was just icing. Hermione catching Draco was amusing as well. Wonderful job.
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  • From ANON - lilly on November 02, 2008
    ahhhhhhhhhh! update! Please?
    I love the whole baking cookies equals to death from cooking to Harry and his crush!
    Excellent. I cannot wait to see what happens when Draco wakes up!!
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  • From blackpaddy on November 02, 2008
    aww that was cute! I love it when Harry or Draco just can't cook... poor dears... Oh, well! At least it soothes my entirely non-existent cooking skills!
    More soon please!
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  • From Cathartesaura on November 02, 2008
    This is really well written, I'm enjoying it - it doesn't seem like Draco is likely to be the Top any time soon, but I don't really mind who is who. Great job and thanks for sharing this!
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  • From Jilliane on November 01, 2008
    (Chapter 3)

    Sorry it's taken me so long to review!

    A probationary wand....that's a good and original idea. Draco's comment made me laugh, although I'm sure you didn't intend it that way. It was just a very 'Draco' line. Maybe Ron and Hermione will be too busy arguing to notice what Harry is up to, and then poor Harry won't feel left out anymore, as he'll be too busy doing...ahem....update soon please!
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  • From sweething10 on October 30, 2008
    I really like the way you're portraying Draco in this fic. A bit unsure of himself, uncomfortable with his crush on Harry, but not really wanting anyone to notice all of this. The "accidental" kiss was too funny! Harry licking his lip afterwards...mmmmmm...that was nice. =)
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on October 28, 2008
    awww that "accidental" was just so cute. draco really needs to swallow at least some of his pride and say thanks
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  • From ANON - Angel on October 27, 2008
    I am so glad that I decided to read your story! I used to be addicted to HD fics and read them pretty much every day, but lately I haven't really had time. Today (since I'm taking care of my sick boyfriend) I thought I'd read a couple for old times sake. Yours was the first I read and I'm so happy I did. I think this was just the story to motivate me to get back into the fandom and start reading again. Thank you again!
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  • From callistianstar on October 27, 2008
    Your Draco makes me squee. Honestly. He's too cute. (Although Draco probably wouldn't appreciate that assessment) Except for that end bit. It is amusing to see him struggling between being inconspicious while still retaining his petulant pride. That "accidental" kiss was an adorable addition. I hope it doesn't take him too long to reconcile with Harry. The present was a wonderful idea. Especially so since you made it fit Draco like his old wand, in some respects. I'm glad you have the next chapter written already. This story detailing their growing attraction is awesome. I'm interested to see how you develop their relationship and what role everyone will take in this war.
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  • From Dezra on October 27, 2008
    I hope that Harry keeps his distance until Draco can grow up. How immature can he get? He knows who his benefactors are but can't appreciate it? He needs a reality check.
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 27, 2008
    Soooo need chapter 4!!!
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  • From Milva on October 01, 2008
    Ohh, I really like it. So different and... just good. Keep writing :)
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  • From Jilliane on September 30, 2008
    (Chapter 2)

    I liked this chapter very much. I liked Draco braving the wilds of the kitchen, and then sticking it out with Molly once he got there and found her in there. Loved it that she went into "motherly" mode and fussed over him a bit, made him eat, made him help with dinner. It was touching later, when he felt proud of his small accomplishment during dinner.

    I like the slow build of thoughts and feelings Draco and Harry are having. Hopefully Ron won't have a complete meltdown when he realises their mutual attraction, and hopefully too Hermione keeps her nosey nose questions and comments about it to herself. I had a nice little chuckle over Harry thinking about Draco's wrists, of all things.

    I didn't receive an e-mail alert when you updated this chapter, so please add me to the list. Don't want to miss a chapter of this. Looking forward to the update.
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 30, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 3!!!
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  • From sweething10 on September 29, 2008
    I'm really enjoying this so far. I like the way you have Draco feeling so uncomfortable, yet keeping himself under control for the most part. And Harry being enamored by Draco's wrists of all things is so cute! Can't wait for more.
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