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Reviews for Hollowed

By : dirtydarella
  • From callistianstar on September 29, 2008
    Too bad Draco wasn't able to follow where Molly was retreiving all of the food from. lol And Harry, jeez, as I just said before for your other story, if Harry is delighted by Draco's wrists... he doesn't stand a chance. I love reading Draco's little reactions to the attentions he receives - which is compeltely understandable seeing as Draco has been people and affection deprived for awhile now. I'm not sure what you meant by Diagon Alley (a present), but it is interesting that you are sharing many of the aspects (the lamp thingy and possibly the book - being the Beedle and the Bard?) from DH. Great job. I like the development so far and I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From callistianstar on September 22, 2008
    Oooh. Very interesting so far. I really like the scene in the kitchen, and that Harry healed Draco. Even moreso, I like the descriptions of though Draco has as far as avoiding everyone, even though he hasn't been mistreated by anyone of the Order so far. As far as keeping Harry and Draco in character, I like Harry was driven to help out Draco, not really understanding or believing what he was and did do for Draco. And as I already said, Draco is spot on, and I'm glad you went this route rather than make him not count his blessings and be first-year arrogant Malfoy. This story probably would have been find under Harry/Draco, but I look forward to reading any other things you might change. Nice job.
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  • From Jilliane on September 22, 2008
    (Chapter 1)

    We go to somewhat pathetic Draco, too cowed to come out of his room to eat, reduced to sneaking about after eveyone has gone to sleep and to eating cold cereal and milk for a week, to hot Draco in the shower, trying desperately to justify wanking off to Harry's image. Nice!

    Can't wait for the update!
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  • From Narcoleptic86 on September 22, 2008
    Love it! Can't wait for an update.
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