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Reviews for A Malfoy Never Loses

By : youngblooduser
  • From blbmusic29 on December 03, 2008
    I really like this story. It's intriguing. Please keep writing? =D

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  • From sjauthor on October 20, 2008
    Hi Jessy! I noticed you have written a story! I must say, I was flattered to see that you were using my claim spell in it. That was great, I really enjoyed that! It made me feel proud, that someone likes something I did so much that they decide to use it themselves.

    Just a little comment, you should space the dialogue out a bit. It is common to skip a line whenever a different person starts to talk; it makes the story easier to read.
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