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Reviews for In His Kiss

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From smmz79 on January 24, 2009
    hmmm this is an interesting little fic.... severus really does watch her.... enough to know what she does on her walks and how she eats...
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on November 26, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From on October 14, 2008
    Lovely and romantic. I'm glad you put it back up. I think I've read all your completed chapter fics now. What an entertaining ride. Thanks!
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  • From GammaOrionis on October 06, 2008
    I like it when Hermione waved at him! SO CUTE! Must read more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 27, 2008
    well done again,,i just love your stories..they are the best..i just loved picturing severus in this light,,so not his caracter..but loved it..and who doesnt love an aggressive Hermione..just love it when a woman taks charge..lol..she had him wipped..lol..did i mention i loved it,,great story..cant wait for the next Severus/Hermione..
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  • From ArabellaSnape on September 24, 2008
    I absolutely loved it. I love the many different facets to Severus Snape.
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  • From neelix on September 24, 2008
    You hung onto this? You kept it to yourself...hidden away, gathering dust?

    How could you! It was just perfect!!!!

    Thank goodness someone nagged you!
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  • From helenesnape on September 24, 2008
    This was really good. Hard to believe that it was a repost of one of your first forays into fan fiction. My first few fics (Hell even some of my more recent ones) were awkward and all over the map...I had so many thoughts running around in my head, it was tough deciding the best way to get my point across.

    Yeah, it was fluffy and sweet but that made a refreshing change from some of the 'hard-ass Snape' type fics. I found it amusing that he was so shy, painfully so, that it could have cost him a chance with Hermione. I enjoyed this very much!

    Thanks!
    MHS
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  • From Gertie on September 24, 2008
    What a sweet story. This Snape is so very proper and, dare I say bashful. Their dates were so formal, it was great to have Hermoine (mildly) seduce him. I loved the way he could see her fantasy, the night they were patrolling. If I were Hermoine I would totally abuse his power, forcing all my naughty thoughts on him. This was a fun read, thanks for reposting!


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  • From kittyperry on September 24, 2008
    That was so lovely - I especially loved the final touch about the Wellies. Thank you for sharing.
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  • From KellyJCR on September 24, 2008
    That was a different story from you. I liked it because it was such Severus thing to do. Him just observing in his quite way and her noticing it but neither of them knowing what to do ( on Hermiones part anyway.). I'm just not sure what exactly Sevs intentions are. They may be quit obvious and I can read it over til I am blue in the face and I will still be on the fence about the whole thing. Either way it was well written and very sweet. I always love a Severus story. Well done!!!
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  • From Larrabee on September 24, 2008
    I LOVE IT!!! And I loved that it is not complicated but straight forward with as little drama as possible. It could use some more details and descriptions but it is heartfelt and lovely.

    SS/HG is my favorite. And you are so spoiling us. 2 chapter + Epilogue and a story I had never read before! SQUEE!! I just loved this story.

    I can't wait for more of your stories. Especially, SS/HG!
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  • From ANON - mariteri on September 24, 2008
    Wow. I could totally tell that it was part of your early writing by the length of your chapters. They used to be much shorter and more driven my dialogue. Now you've strengthened your writing up so that you don't have to depend as much on your dialogue (which by the way has only gotten better!) Lovely work and please put out a new story out soon.
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  • From jddammann on September 23, 2008
    As always, perfect! Loved the story-line, the characters, the love, the minimal angst, the sex, and the outcome!!

    You are so good!!!!!!!:-)


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  • From wishyouwere on September 23, 2008
    lol!
    I just read that part that reminded me why this story had been stuck in my mind! The scene in the Great Hall when they show up wearing each others robes...I am glad that someone talked you into posting this again. And I really enjoyed 'Something In the Way She Moves'. When I come fome freom a grueling day at work or a rough day at the doctors with my oldest, your stories give me those few, precious moments where I can escape, if only for a little while. They have been an invaluable gift, and thank you so much for your talent and for sharing it with all of us.
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