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Reviews for Dancing With Dragons

By : addictdragonX33
  • From dragongirl on September 15, 2009
    Unexpected but very intresting and insightful!!!!!!!! Specially for Draco's point of view... Please at some point let Hermione hear the "I love you", it is very important for both....... Sorry I am such a romantic soul........LOL
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  • From on September 13, 2009
    Argh!
    What comes next?
    This is a great story. Not many people are good with plot, and you are.
    Please continue!
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  • From ScarletSnow on August 28, 2009
    Like so many comments before mine... I really like the plot and the story but all of your spelling and grammar mistakes are detracting from the story you're trying to tell.

    If you look on the forums I'm sure there's at least one person that would be more than willing to be a proofreader for you. PLEASE get someone to go through it for you or with you. If you can't get someone online try someone in real life. A friend with a good grasp of the English language or maybe a teacher at a school that you go to. (If you go to school)

    You should always have someone proofread your work before you post it, another set of eyes will help you catch any errors that you yourself missed the first time through.

    Please don't be lazy, get a proofreader.

    ~Scarlet Snow
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  • From prayspivey on August 26, 2009
    Wow Malfoy must be really messed up from gettin the mark or really hurt of Hermoine.
    I can't want tell you update please do it soon.
    Always love what you come up wit.
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  • From dragongirl on August 25, 2009
    My heart is so sad for my beautiful Draco.... and also for Hermione, they are so much in love and now... Well that is still to come... right? More please this is toooooo gooood.. LOL
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  • From GreenAndSilverTie on August 25, 2009
    Hello =]
    So I've been reading this story for quite a while ( Sorry for not reviewing, though I might have but I dont remember =S ) and I have made a decision. This story is not good, ITS AWESOME! I LOVE it!!!!!! So, to show how much I love your detailed originality and thrilling plot, I have... made you a weird-picturey-thingy-that-I-don't-know-what-to-call! :)
    Link-
    http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/1537/dancingwithdragons.jpg

    Also if you are looking for a beta I would love to help!

    G&ST
    x
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  • From TwinSanity on August 25, 2009
    It's a great story, just need someone to beta. The spelling mistakes and bad grammer does take some away from the story. But i think it's great anyway.
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  • From ksinnis on August 21, 2009
    It is hard to know how to really respond to this story! First of all, I'm loving the story line. Draco/Hermione is my favourite pairing. I love the direction that you're going with the story, and how dark it is, coupled with redeeming factors such as Draco and Hermione's "friendship", etc.

    At the beginning of the first chapter you said you didn't have a beta. That was the biggest mistake you made. Up until about the 10th chapter you didn't spell Neville's name correctly even once. It was always variations of "Neval" and "Nevel". When Hermione was suffering the effects of the Crucio curse, that was also spelled incorrectly ("Circio"?). There are other various misuses of words ("crease" instead of "caress") which are really distracting to the story. If a reader has to stop and think about what word you actually meant to use, it really breaks the flow of the story and makes it hard to get back into.

    However, I don't want to discourage you. I keep reading because I really like your story and I want to see where you go with it, and I can overlook the minor problems re: spelling, word misuse, etc. I do think it would be wise if you had a beta go back and read/edit for you, as your story could be near flawless with some minor fixes.

    That being said, I'm looking forward to future chapters :)
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  • From dragongirl on August 20, 2009
    OMG girl what a cliffie you want to kill us with a heartattack? This is getting too good.. more please and please we need Harry and Ron just for a bid or a glimse... or maybe as the rescuers? LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From shadows77769 on August 19, 2009
    omgggggg no cliffhangers please D=.seriously that is so unfair. talented authors shouldnt be allowed to make cliffhangers =[. It's probably dangerous to some people.... what if someone was really into this story and you did that? their mind might explode... like mine just did =[ please update soon... love the writing =] keep it up
    no mroe cliffs though please D=
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  • From Queenie7 on August 19, 2009
    Interesting start. I really like your writing style even if the Draco/Hermione head girl and boy thing is a little overplayed. Also, other than a lack of commas and a few spelling errors here and there it was quite good. Now I'm off to read more chapters!
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  • From stbroeke on August 14, 2009
    HOLY CRAP! I am so hooked that I think I log on everyday to see if there are new updates. I can't wait to read what happens next. The suspense is killing me.
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  • From shadows77769 on August 13, 2009
    and yet another amazing chapter =]hope you do an update soon =[. the worst part is waiting on a great author to release her next piece of the series ;)
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  • From dragongirl on August 11, 2009
    This was sweet and enchanting!! We need more and more..
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  • From margaritama on August 11, 2009
    Lordy that was so amazing and tender and emotional. It was really lovely....I'm surprised their first names didn't slip out at some point. ooooo, don't tease us with that last line...show us....LOL
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