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Reviews for Dancing With Dragons

By : addictdragonX33
  • From shadows77769 on August 06, 2009
    All I can think of is wow o.O~This story captivated me from the beginning, I just read your whole story nonstop overnight....its 8 in the morning here. that is how entranced i was by your story... you really do have amazing writing skills and creativity~this might be a long review seeing as i read the whole 19 chapters at once.~first. I think you managed to capture Draco's personality better than any fanfic author could have even managed to dream of.~I find it hard to explain why I love your writing style so much. I guess you could say its actually professional minus some of the spelling and grammar mistakes, which really weren't that big of a deal, your sentences are understandable so it works out xD~I think you should add a chapter on Hagrid and dean's little trip through the forest.~i reeeeeeeealy hope you update often... judging by your authors notes u seem to, you apologized for not updating for 3 weeks.(I really appreciate that by the way). I know some authors on this site that update a new chapter once every month or so >.>~I'm probably sounding redundant right about now so I'll try to close this review up as best as I can.~again I love your writing style and the way u managed to catch the main characters personalities so magnificently.I spent the majority of the day and night reading ur whole story.. I really hope you stick with this story, i can't speak for everyone else but you have me personally hooked, I most likely will be looking for updates daily =p. Keep up the amazing work, and don't let anyone put you down. You are an amazing writer =]p.s. I really hope you don't make any extended trips to Greece soon as i may have to hunt you down xD. Pansy is a bitch :D
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  • From margaritama on August 04, 2009
    And now a bit of romance in the face of this horror....some love to combat the hate....
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  • From dragongirl on June 27, 2009
    Getting dark and getting interesting more than what it was.. We need some butt kicking in here as the soonest the best.... LOL
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  • From margaritama on June 26, 2009
    I'm reeling...holy crap -- that scene with Carrow had me trembling in fear....and Draco came to the rescue with Blaise. There's hope for them yet. Didn't Hermione understand and see behind Draco's words? She knows him better than that...do you think he realized that he called her "his" girl and that he noted he "loved" the fire in her eyes....probably not.

    Great update.
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  • From dragongirl on May 11, 2009
    OMG That was intense... and good... Keep them coming.
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  • From robbiekoon on May 11, 2009
    You have a pretty good story going here but please get a beta. Your grammar and punctuation errors detract from the story you're trying to tell. Otherwise, good job.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 26, 2009
    wow thats intense
    i hope u update soon
    i want to know what happens next!!
    :)
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  • From Ryushi on April 23, 2009
    I'm loving this story so far! But I do wish you'd get a beta; grammar and spelling mistakes can be distracting. Other than that, kudos on your writing!
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  • From margaritama on March 23, 2009
    glad you're back writing this - the turmoil and situation is getting darker and more dangerous.


    once piece of con crit: can you give this a once over in terms of proofreading? the errors made it difficult to read. txs..looking forward to your update!
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  • From dragongirl on March 23, 2009
    Long Great and Fabulous... What more we can ask for.. Oh yeah a new chapter.... LOL Keep them coming is getting intresting.
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  • From arfiegel on March 14, 2009
    This is a very good plot! I like it a lot. Despite the grammar errors which could be taken care of by a beta, it is a very good read. There is a balance between the sexual and non-sexual parts of the plot and it flows quite well.

    BTW, if you need a beta, I'd be happy to help. :)
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on March 12, 2009
    dont worry hon, atleast i am still here, and RL is very important and so is school, you r forgiven and if anyone really loves your story they would be loyal, ppl have left stories for years before they finish them and they have their readers so have no fear. looking forward to reading more though. Hope u r well.

    respect
    Scarlet
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  • From margaritama on January 20, 2009
    Maybe Draco should just relieve her stress himself...that dirty, talking, hot, smexy bastard!
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  • From DarkAngel25 on January 02, 2009
    i love this story how could you leave it hanging like that lol...i cant wait until u put up more chapters and i hope its soon. :-)
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on December 31, 2008
    freaking long ,long chapter, it was madness, I was on the edge of the cliffy with the cliffy u left us with in chap10, but in chap 11 I wanted her to make draco squirm and grovel alot more, and boy that ALMOST SMUT SCene was.....falls of chair*. There was alot of things I want to say about the chapter especially i love where the story is going, and I so scared for hermione when she came back through the floo, and I wanted to strangle draco, but draco really did save her alot, and what about pansy, isnt she a liability with telling the carrows what was going on with draco and hermione. maybe we will be seeing her again causing trouble as usual. But the chemistry between your hermione and draco is scorching, and geez that girl cant seem to keep much clothes on around him can she, its like see draco, clothes dissappear...rofl. And what is the deal with that necklace, I know its something big. Girl thanks again for the long chapter. Update soon.
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