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By : addictdragonX33
  • From docjen on December 31, 2008
    Wow. This is a great story. I just have some issues with the misspelling of names (Neville, McGonagall, etc.) and the grammer. You may need to fix those issues and re-edit the chapters before you post them, with a fresh set of eyes (i.e. type and look at the chapter the next day). This is not meant as a flame, for I have really enjoyed this story.
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  • From margaritama on December 29, 2008
    Hi - sorry, the whole thing with the Carrows threw me...why are they at the school?? Did I miss something in one of the chapters? It's just very left field that Death Eaters are at the school and that it's ok. If I missed in a chapter, please point it out.

    GREAT scene at end...just a note that you need a Beta to help with grammar, just makes it hard to read (no a flame by the way, I think its a HOT story).
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  • From sofrow on December 12, 2008
    This story is really amazing, i cant wait for an update :)
    You really encapsulated the characters, great job
    you better not wait too long, im on a cliff here!
    Scarlets Angel x
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on December 08, 2008
    did I mention I loved this chapter, and it was a total-floor-vanishing-out-from-under-u, turn-completely-180-in-a-second chapter, LOVE where u r going with this, and I am actually very afraid for hermione. *sits in corner and whimpers*

    Scarlet
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on December 08, 2008
    WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
    *stares in disbelief at addict* One minute hermione raging hell on the lying bastard and the next the war is rushed up on them like a slap in the face. I loved raging hermione, and I almost felt sorry for draco, ALMOST!!! but I love that he was determined to save her. Ron BETTER GET HIS ACT TOGETHER!!! And I loved the cold and empty but warrior hermione walking back into the snake pit. I have a couple songs for this chapter and its all for meh girl Hermy: Godsmack - I fucking Hate you, Marilyn Manson - Better of two Evils, Evanesscence - Lithium. And Holy SHIT!!!!!!!!!! that last the two lines were icing on a very fat, rotting cake. *passed out on the floor, not moving, gathering dust, becoming dust.....*

    FUCKING UPDATE
    RESPECT
    SCARLET
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  • From dragonsgirl on December 08, 2008
    such a hot chapter hun! I love where you're going with this! I love the way you portray your Draco! So creative and sexy! You made a few typos and grammar mistakes though. This is such a good story but I sometimes find myself having to reread things to understand what you're trying to say! Don't worry about it though I make lots of mistakes too. Can not wait to see how Draco reacts to her coming back!!!
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on November 23, 2008
    oh my gosh,firstly I want to thank u for the chappy dedication and the appreciation of my review, I am glad it did inspire you and kept u motivated. I am suprised of the lack of reviews for this story, but dont worry it will come along give it time. Oh and this chapter was so intense and emotional, it seems like every time they venture into one of these escapades they become unwilling closer and things get more complicated. That necklace has some story to it, and I cant wait to find out. And oh my god she did beg him to fuck her, that was brutal, I really cant wait for the next chapter, and u have a great story, but there are alot of typos, I hipe u find a beta cuz u r a great writer. again i am honoured for the hail out and acknowledgement, and I only speak the truth in my reviews, and I am glad that they truly help. Update soon.

    Respect
    Scarlet
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  • From DaOnleeSam on November 23, 2008
    Nice this was the best!
    I can't wait for the next update, this was fantastic.
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on November 19, 2008
    OHMG, OMFG ADDICTDRAGON,
    This is some story, it is sorching, hot, tension filled, drama entwined, emotions running wild, and potentially dangerous for all those involved. Oh I smell the storm brewing and I absolutely love the long chapters, poor hermione the poor girl doesn't know up from down and i don't know what exactly is gonna happen but i am scared for her, because i could see her getting so hurt and betrayed in the future, draco is his usual snarky, sexy, egotistical prat and I wouldn't have it any other way. You have down to a T in my opinion.
    Their encounters have left me begging for more, but part of me just wants hermione to tell malfoy shove it all to hell, cause he will break her so badly, and he still her under him in more ways than one. That last chapter had me stupified how she brought herself three orgsams looking at herself in the mirror and thinking of him, and he heard it all, OMFG, OMFG. I was sweating bullets, thats probably the rawest thing I have read hermione doing so bluntly, and did sweetly. Oh the potion you put up on the 5th chapter was very interesting, and I think sanpe would be proud at it complexity and originality, it was mind blowing, I wanted to go and make it...lol. Oh and the story about lady helen and Gallant, it was so beautiful and sad, sniff, sniff...lol.
    Another thing Kamilla, I dont know what to think about her, I thought she was geniune but she is a slytherin, but she did seem like she really wanted to help hermione, but then draco pulled that shit with the other girl and I loved the way she reacted and portrayed the third participant in the play, she was good. Draco's taunting and his hot words are the bane of my exsistence, something he says something and it HOLY, BLOODY HELL, COLD SHOWER NOW!!!!!! *shakes Head*
    Gods I cant wait to read more, more, more, brilliant writing, and I love the storyline, and i hope draco stays his angsty snarky self for a while, cause if he suddenly change it would make no sense, and really hope poor hermione will survive, she is really mixed up emotionally. UPDATE.

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  • From bananasforyou on November 12, 2008
    i love it!
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  • From dragonsgirl on November 12, 2008
    Hot!!! You never fail to impress!!! keep up the great work! I love how you're showing their thoughts and feelings! (^-^)/
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on November 08, 2008
    First off I thought this story just your run of the mill dramione, BOY HOW WRONG AM I? It is filled with so much emotion and twists and turns and happenings that it literally had my mind spinning in all the possibilities of this fic and I literally drooling for more, great long chapters, so much tension and OH Fucks!!! the first 4 chapters had squealing like a banshee and here is my honest review from a fangirl. The honest angst, sexual tension, the anger and confusion of their situations is making it all so real. So much happened in 4 chapters that it left me wondering, frightened, and excited at the same time for the rest of the story, and hermione her pain and loneliness is raw it is painfull and I could so understand it. Oh and I got jealous of draco for hermione everytime he was with someone else, and I am also a little worried for with this bet. I am chewing out my nails, and I still 2 new chapter to read so yayyyyyy. And I wanted her to rip that tom guy to pieces, to bad draco held her back. Keep up the brilliant work and long chapters.
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  • From dragonsgirl on November 06, 2008
    Ahh! I'm actually loving this story. Hoping Draco doesn't turn out to be an asshole though! Update soon!
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  • From bananasforyou on September 25, 2008
    oh i loved it and i miss it the first time but you spelled slytherins wrong.
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  • From Ltybabygrl05 on September 24, 2008
    thanks for the story. I really enjoyed it.
    Can't wait till you update.
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