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Reviews for Eternal Mistakes On The Spotless Soul

By : CryingCinderella
  • From rox487 on October 06, 2008
    love it cant wait to read more please update soon and i think Hermione should keep the baby
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  • From littlesirene on October 06, 2008
    Hey realy like this story, sad but good. However i thought this was a hermione/snape story it doesn't seem like they will get together. and does hermione keep the baby?
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  • From ANON - sljh on October 06, 2008
    Okay.
    He doesn't DESERVE the baby boy, then. Fine. Someday he'll probably regret it, no matter who ends up raising him. It's ironic how some people think that the only way to deal with their own grief is to be cruel and hurtful to others.

    I STILL say that she should keep HER baby. Fuck him. As his excuse for "one drunken mistake" in impregnating her and creating the "abomination," it's just a convenient scapegoat. A man in love, no matter how drunk, wouldn't cheat on his fiance. Methinks he doth protest too much.

    And I'm still wondering after Nalina's panic to hurry up and get married, as well as what Draco and Ginny were plotting....and why. With no love between Severus and Hermione, what the hell was the point of ruining the wedding, unless Nalina was being duplicitous? Or something....

    There just seems to be something off.

    I could care or less if Snape ever even likes Hermione but I'd like to see her keep her own baby. But that's just the maternal instinct in me kicking in, LOL.
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  • From KellyJCR on October 06, 2008
    You have lost your mind! I do intend that to be a compliment. This stroy is very imaginative and I can not wait to see what you have in store. If this is a Severus/Hermione I don't have a clue of what you will do to get them together. That scene in the garden was beyond harsh. I know Severus is snarky and he has lost more than any man should but, I would think that he would at least want to know his child. I don't know why he hated Hermione so much previously, was it because of the typical Gryfindor know-it-all thing or has something else occured. I am so looking forward to more. Well done!!!!!!!
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  • From neelix on October 06, 2008
    Oh... I think my heart is breaking. Beautifully done, but now i am crying.

    Please update soon.
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  • From Larrabee on October 06, 2008
    It is Ginny's fault. I mean she always loved a scandal. I don't see why she had to creat a scene. Why she had to stop the wedding. It could have been another time, before or after, even. But not during.
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  • From Darkwolf01 on October 06, 2008
    This has some strong emotion in it. It tears you up and brings you down to their level, allowing you to feel what they feel. God, i couldn't imagine losing so much in so little a time. Life is harsh for poor Severus, and i feel he deserved his happiness with Nalina and his child, and damn Fate takes it away.

    Poor Hermione as well. She never intended this to happen, let alone have him think that she was the whole cause of this tragedy. She isn't. I have a feeling that she isn't, that it's Fate, so to speak, that is using her to be involved in this bizarre and tragic event thats happened to these people. I mean she was at that bar for a reason, and so was Severus.

    I do wonder how it will play out. Looking forward to more,

    Wolf
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  • From ANON - Snakelette on October 06, 2008
    My, this certainly is a unique story. I hope Severus' harsh rejection ( abominiation gods!) of their son, makes her change her mind about rejecting him herself, and keeping him. Any Severus/Hermione closeness seems pretty hopeless now, but, being a hopeless romantic, I will cross my fingers for them.
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  • From ANON - Kramsne on October 06, 2008
    *gets bat* Bad Severus! That's not how you talk to Hermione.

    Anyway, this could turn out to be quite interesting.
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  • From chickaboo on October 06, 2008
    Okay. So I'm feeling throughly depressed now. I know, I know. We can't just expect Severus to be all rainbow and puppies at the moment. But what a horrible thing to say about a child. A child who had no say, who had nothing to do with any of what happened. I can understand his anger at Hermione....as much as it isn't her fault, I still understand it. Anyway, can't wait for more.....hopefully happy stuff? Like Hermione deciding at the last minute to keep the baby? Please?
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  • From chickaboo on October 06, 2008
    Oh I hope it's too late and Hermione gets attached to her baby and can't go through with giving him up. Please? And that was sad what happened to Severus and Nalina. Perhaps Severus can find solace if not with Hermione, but with his newborn son. A reason to go on living life and all that. Anyway, talk about twists galore. What does Draco have to do with all this? And he and Ginny are 'together'?! Get back here!!
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  • From ApollinaV on October 06, 2008
    Oh I did not see that one coming... and apparently Nahlina didn't either. That took balls woman. Usually fans scream foul when characters get killed off. Not that Nahlina was scoring brownie points either, but damn. How cold. And what drama. I some how really don't think some megawat switch will be thrown and Sev immediatly fall head over heels for the Gryffindor witch and kid. Maybe feel responsible for the boy though. I'm thinking in terms of American muggle laws when I consider parental rights. If he's the legal father, she may not be able to arbitrarily sign over the adoption papers without his consent... which I don't see Severus doing either. Oooh... plot thickens. I can't wait to see what becomes of this mess.
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  • From catysmom1028 on October 05, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From ArabellaSnape on October 05, 2008
    I feel bad for Nalina but why cannot they Severus/Hermione love each other? What are Ginny and Draco planning? Did Severus really love Nalina? I know I say that I just want him to be happy but I realize that if he cannot be with me then Hermione is a suitable replacement. He cannot be with anyone else, I won't accept it. In my reality He never care one whit for that Lily woman!
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  • From ANON - sljh on October 05, 2008
    Wow. I didn't expect you to kill off the Malfoy girl. I guess, by the worried and desperate way she was acting, I thought that she was actually carrying somebody else's baby but wanted to trap Severus into marriage before he figured it out. Well, even if she's a goner, I hope you didn't kill her innocent baby, too. I still hope that it turns out that Nalina's baby was not fathered by Severus, though. As for Hermione, I hope she keeps her baby -- she deserves to be happy and it IS her baby.

    I STILL say that if Severus loved Nalina so much, he wouldn't been out at bars picking up other women and having sex at about the same time that he supposedly impregnated his fiance. Regardless, the age gap arguement between Hermione and Severus will be a moot point in this world.

    Keep posting until finished, please. I'm still looking for the final chapters in Pillow Fight...
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