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Reviews for Eternal Mistakes On The Spotless Soul

By : CryingCinderella
  • From neelix on October 03, 2008
    This is really really good! I can't wait to see how you spin it around though.... intruiging, indeed!
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  • From ApollinaV on October 02, 2008
    Two thoughts:

    I didn't understand the line in the earlier chapter that her mistake was to keep the floo connection open and Ginny retrieving her scarf. That didn't seem to have any relevance to how the plotline later developed.

    I did not fail to notice that the chick Sev's marrying is remarkably similar in description to how Hermione had glamoured herself. Malfoy blond with grey eyes. Maybe it was an adequate assumption when she turned up preggers that he was the sperm doner. I hate to think that a drunken bathroom shag was catalyst for him seeking out similarly looking females in some unrequited love mess.
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  • From anncee on October 01, 2008
    well this simply will not do!! what about lucius' daughter?? does severus love her? is SHE carrying severus' child too?!?! AAHHHHHH hurry and update so i can knowwwwwwwwwwwww!!!
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  • From Heidi191976 on September 30, 2008
    A great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 30, 2008
    very very good. more *looks blood thirsty*
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  • From chickaboo on September 30, 2008
    Uh oh. So wait. Does Severus REALLY care about Lucius's daughter? NOOOOOOOO! Say it isn't so! PLEASE!!!! And it can't be his kid....the one Malfoy's daughter is carrying. It has to be a set up.



    This is what I shall continue to believe until you update and set the record straight. Yep. So you better, you know, update. Soon. Please?
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  • From neelix on September 30, 2008
    That'll teach him!!

    lmao! I so hope you can update quickly!
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  • From catysmom1028 on September 30, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From RoseEvans on September 30, 2008
    This is better then the soap's!!!!!
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  • From chickaboo on September 29, 2008
    Okay. I'm upgrading to cruel and unusual punishment here. I'm so on edge here I don't what to do. I'm actually feeling a bit lost and short of breath. lol This is awesome. So the bride is preggers too? Is Severus really the father of that baby? If Lucius is trying to salvage a bastard daughter I wouldn't put it past him to find a way to get the girl pregnant by some Tom, Dick, or Harry and then some how pin it on Severus to get him to marry the girl. Or offer him some exorbitant amount of money to get him to marry the girl even if the kid isn't his, or blackmail...or, oh dear. Just, update. Soon. With longer chapters and more information. I don't think my heart can take another one of your cliffhangers. Their rather intense. lol I can't wait for more!!

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  • From Heidi191976 on September 28, 2008
    Interesting chapter. Two pregnant ladies, what is Severus going to do now? I hope that he will end up with Hermione and not Lucius' daughter. Maybe her baby isn't his. That would put a twist to things. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From RoseEvans on September 28, 2008
    LOVE it, just Love it. Keep up the great work kid
    I want to find out what happens next!
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on September 28, 2008
    I generally dont review before a fic is complete and Ill admit, Im bad about reviewing in general....its an interesting premise so far. I get the feeling that the child the girl carries isnt snapes...that he is marrying her to save her rep...question is, whose child is it? I have theories of course, assuming that my assumption is correct....one a bit squicky....one that raises a whole new world of scary possibilities and a few others that are more romantic and make me chuckle a little....(wouldnt it be a hoot if Neville Longbottom or a Weasly knocked up Malfoy's daughter hehe)

    As long as Sev doesnt end up being a complete fucker and debaucher Im good. I love Severus and always love to read stories where he finds happiness and love, hes had such a miserable life already, he needs no more =)


    Alright, I will continue to have a nosy through the story as you update!

    Happy Writing!
    S_G
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  • From angelnomiko on September 28, 2008
    wow that was w great start ..please please update soon .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Soleklart on September 28, 2008
    No no no. I need more chapters. NOW! *puppy eyes*
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