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Reviews for Eternal Mistakes On The Spotless Soul

By : CryingCinderella
  • From thebullygetsthegirlifheisjames on October 24, 2009
    If Hermione was impregnated a month after Nalina, how come Nalina was still preggers when Hermione popped Snotbag Jr out?
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  • From thebullygetsthegirlifheisjames on October 24, 2009
    Snape's words are understandable, though he's wrong in blaming Hermione instead of Ginny. The redheaded cunt is the one who set in motion the series of events that killed Severus' wedding to Nalina and Nalina. Severus should curse Ginny so that a hundred blunt knives are embedded in her body all at once and then repeatedly heated and wiggled and wiggled in random groups. No knives in her mouth and throat of course, because that would get in the way of her screaming.
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  • From thebullygetsthegirlifheisjames on October 24, 2009
    What a cowardly writer you are, taking the easy way out! The car should have hit Ginny, not Nalina.
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  • From thebullygetsthegirlifheisjames on October 24, 2009
    It sounds like Ginny should be disembowelled and left in the middle of the forbidden forest near the acromantula colony while she's still breathing with a scream-powered spell cast on her to make her remain alive for as long as possible while the spiders feast on her innards
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  • From ANON - emer on August 20, 2009
    love the story please update!!!
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  • From LCGrabski on July 28, 2009
    I was just thinking about this story today and was hoping that there would be a new chapter up. No pressure or anything... just hopeful wishing. Crossing my fingers your plot bunnies will keep on plotting.
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  • From Heidi191976 on July 23, 2009
    An excellent chapter. I hope that Severus and Hermione are found soon before they die. I also hope that they claim baby Nolan and decide to raise him together. There were a couple of mistakes, though.
    1. You doubled the following paragraph "Draco stood idly by, unable to make a stand against his father. Whether he liked it or not, Lucius was in charge. And if Lucius was going to smack her around, then what did it matter? Apparently she had only been using him to settle some score with her mother and his father anyhow. A frown crossed his lips as he once more tried to catch the eye of the girl he
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 22, 2009
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  • From catysmom1028 on July 22, 2009
    I like it. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - cranky monday reviewer on December 01, 2008
    HELLLO!!!!!

    I'M STILL WAITING AND AM GETTING IMPATIENT!!!

    GET BACK TO WRITING MISSY!!!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on November 30, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Electrical Storms on November 28, 2008
    Please, please tell me you haven't abandoned this story. I've been checking to see if any new chapters have been added. Please, can we have some new chapters? Pretty please? ;0)
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  • From ANON - Electrical Storms on November 11, 2008
    Desperately seeking Cinderellie...we need new chapters really, really badly. Pleeeeeease? ;0)
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  • From ANON - cranky monday reviewer on November 10, 2008
    Hellllooooooooo.........

    Anybody home?
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  • From catysmom1028 on November 06, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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