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Reviews for Eternal Mistakes On The Spotless Soul

By : CryingCinderella
  • From ANON - sevsgirl on November 06, 2008
    Cinderell! Cinderelli!

    Off your tushy, Cinderelli!

    Write a chappie. Make it snappy!

    And in the end, we'll all be happy!

    Welcome back Cinderelli!


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  • From CryingCinderella on November 06, 2008
    Greetings Readers!

    I apologize for my absence! There was so much going on here
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  • From KellyJCR on November 06, 2008
    I'm so glas your back! I was wondering what had happend and hoped you hadn't abandoned your story. I see what I call "life boat" romance situation appearng. To explain it I would have to say that when a catastrophic situation presents itself some people muscontrue a need for closeness and turn to sex to ease the need. I don't know if that is what you have in mind but I don't see another reason the two of them could possibly get together after all that has happened. Love the fact you gave Harry a little fun for the time being and I like your Lenore character. Can't wait for more. Well done!!
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  • From ANON - cranky reviewer on November 05, 2008
    Ok. What's the best way to put this?.....

    Where the hell have you been?

    After all this time - ONE chapter?!

    Are you kidding?!

    One more today and a couple tomorrow and I'll think about forgiving you.

    Tick tock Cindy, time's a wastin.



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  • From ANON - Electrical Storms on November 05, 2008
    Yay - an update! Okay, this is good stuff. Ginny's character is really getting good. I wonder if she married Harry in good faith to begin with or if there was some ulterior motive there that just didn't work out, and it made her want to get rid of the pregnancy. In any event, a juicy development there with Ginny. Can't wait to see what Lucius has on her. I love a good story of intrigue! ::shivers with anticipation::

    The Lenore and Harry sex-fest - I find myself applauding Harry. He deserves some happiness - or at least a good roll in the hay- after what Ginny just did to him. I hope it works out for those two. Now wouldn't that be some crazy salad!

    Okay, I have to admit no matter how well they care for Hermione's baby I still want Hermione to get her son back and to be the great success she's destined to be. She'll crack the case, I know she will. She's too smart not to. Poor Hermione; her hormones must be going bonkers. It would be great for Snape to (eventually, we hope) get his head out of his ass and recognize her for the jewel she is - as is his son. But it's going to be a really good journey getting there - fantastic chapter! I loved it! More, more, more! ;0
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  • From ApollinaV on November 05, 2008
    Oh, terrible thought but I have a suggestion for the boy's name.

    Granger Snape.

    Hey, this is the new milenium. People are giving lastnames to children as first names. I point to any wacked out celebrity as fodder for my case.

    Not terribly inventive as a name (thought it does have some cool to it) but given Ministry records, that might be the name he's recorded with.

    Take the suggestion and do what you will with it.
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  • From ApollinaV on November 05, 2008
    Wow. Now that I'm all caught-up... wow. There's so much here, but thankfully as odd as some of the connections and circumstances are; it doesn't feel like a soap opera anymore. Well, there is the now naked big boobed (1) twin sister seperated at birth... And copulating forced-together by hypothermia cabin-bound impossible twosome... But at least it seemes like there's the beginings of something. Something good can happen. Or not. Though if this is a morality-tale where things always work out with rainbows and unicorns for the heros and the bad guys get the boot then Ginny's in for some serious comeuppance. But then you always defy the stereotypes, so I guess my money might be on Evil!Ginny walking away without a scrape. Oh, not that I was surprised that she was forceably not trying to conceive. I just wonder how things got to the point where she was nearly wretching with the thought of carrying the-love-of-her-life's child. What went so horribly wrong for Ginny to totally fall out of love for Harry? Hmmm???? Gonna answer that one for me? Inquiring minds still want a name for the boy, but at least the naming has been addressed.
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  • From Heidi191976 on November 05, 2008
    This was great. I hope that Someone will be able to find Severus and Hermione soon before the end up dying from the cold. I look forward to reading more to see what Ginny is hiding and what Lucius has to do with it.
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on November 05, 2008
    I can't wait to read more between Snape and Hermione. Keep up the good work.
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  • From TriniMinx on November 05, 2008
    Eh, okay.
    More nakedness. Sure why not, LOL.
    I'll bite my comments and wait for the next chapter, to formulate some more theories. :o)
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  • From ANON - Sheena on October 30, 2008
    Hey loved this chapter, update soon
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  • From ANON - Electrical Storms on October 26, 2008
    Cinderellie? Are you okay? Desperately waiting for an update. Pretty please? ;0)
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  • From catysmom1028 on October 23, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From jessicashae2005 on October 21, 2008
    omg! I love this story soo much! Please update soon the waiting is killing me!
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  • From ANON - Electrical Storms on October 19, 2008
    Sycophantic?

    I don't even know this author personally and since this is fanfic it's not as though there's any money involved. There isn't much to be gained by falsely claiming the fic is good if the reviewer doesn't really think it is.

    Not everyone will enjoy every fic, and I'm sure there's something for just about everyone on the board. If you don't like the fic, feel free to express your opinion but I'm sure there's other fics on the site to enjoy; you don't have to continue reading this one. If there's something specific you don't like about the fic, by all means, lay it out there for the author. "Sucks ass" is your opinion and you're certainly entitled, but why not tell the author what exactly you think could be improved in the fic? That's one of the things the review function is for.

    Some of us love the fic and want to know where it's going. The author's plotline is certainly a different take on it and I'm enjoying the plot twists and turns. I didn't expect this one to follow strictly conventional lines. I'm sure this fic has just barely scratched the surface and all the loose ends will be wrapped up in subsequent chapters.

    We've got Draco and Ginny's role in this to explore as well as what will become of Severus and Hermione's son. Harry's divorced now and giving Lenore the googly eyes; Lenore wants the baby, so there's that to flesh out. Why did Ginny feel it was necessary to stop the wedding, and what sort of dirt does Lucius have that's suitable for blackmail?

    In retrospect I don't think it's so shocking that they slept together. I think Severus is terribly lonely and grieving, and at this point Hermione is a warm, female body in which he can take a small measure of immediate comfort. I think he's plain exhausted; mentally and physically, and tired of being in pain, and this was a temporary, accidental escape for him. Plus, he was about to become a popsicle in the freezing front room of the cabin.

    I'm looking forward to lots more chapters. ;0) I volunteer to beta read! I'm a stickler for grammar, style and spelling, and I'm a very quick read. ;0)

    No ulterior motive there, CryingCinderella. ;0) I'm looking forward to more chapters.

    electricalstorms@gmail.com
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