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Reviews for You Really Got A Hold On Me

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From ANON - Mia on September 30, 2008
    Lucius keeps "popping up"? Naked? That settles it, I'm moving in with you. Definately sounds like a good time to be had. Not a bad way to be harrassed I think. I really enjoyed this bit. It was tasty and tingly and ... well, it made my no no parts feel happy. Thanks for the fun love.

    ~Mia~ prissiepup@hotmail.com. (Should you feel inclined. Don't feel obligated please. But I know what it's like to want to say something back, and not be able to.)
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  • From Utopia on September 30, 2008
    Isn't a PDA one of those hand-held computery-things??

    Invested? Investments are worthless in the current financial mess! lol!

    no-no place? That's a new one on me! lol.

    Ooooh, daring a Gryff! She'll take the bait with that!

    Ooooooooooh, be still my beating heart! Oh oh oh! Dirty dancing type dancing! Like when Baby takes in the water melon! *swoons into puddle of goo*

    In the middle of a maze? Well, that's a first one for me! I've not read that before!

    Awwwww! Can't I claim a bit of lack of focussing here? I tried really hard with my little ficlets for you!


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  • From chickaboo on September 30, 2008
    Yes I can see how hard it must be for you to have to deal with a naked Lucius just showing up. It's a shame really. Must be torture. lol Great one shot! I loved it!
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  • From tsorg on September 29, 2008
    Lovely, hot story. I really love your Snape and Hermione stories but I adore your Lucius and Hermione stories, they are hot and sweet. No no place LOL!
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  • From lily69 on September 29, 2008
    That was delicious! I love Lucius. I WANT Lucius! :-)

    The bit w/ Ron & Lavendar was precious!

    Excellent one-shot!
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  • From Terrie on September 29, 2008
    Well naked blond men will do that, you know. Disrupt your focus, that is. You will just have to concentrate harder or write faster in between disruptions. LOL Hot story! Thanks so much for sharing.
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  • From Byrony on September 29, 2008
    "Ronald Weasley do you have a no-no place?"...LMAO
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  • From MilleniumForever on September 29, 2008
    HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT! GOOD LORD HOT!!! Well written and wonderful I LOVED IT!

    Must this be a one-shot? Its got the makings of a chapter-fic... and the finality of a one-shot. you could make it either.... Please consider a chapter-fic, if not this story.. than the background and/or future to it?? Maybe??

    *cookies shaped covered in frosting*

    ~Sophie Max-Anderson


    --- Very well written, especially to have her this worked up over Het. She is a SLASH Goddess.. and you managed to get a reaction out of her with Het. I commend you.

    -- Rikash Moonsword
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  • From ANON - mariteri on September 29, 2008
    The story was a good one.
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on September 29, 2008
    ~*SG*~

    As always, brilliant!! Great song choice and a hot read!

    Glad Hermione took a chance on Lucius!!!

    Love and Hugs!!!

    Lady B*

    xoxoxoxo
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  • From sweething10 on September 29, 2008
    I certainly wouldn't mind a naked Lucius distracting me once in a while! Loved the whole "dirty dancing" thing.
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  • From Larrabee on September 29, 2008
    Hello AGAIN!! I love your stories.

    I just wanted to let you know the song is from 1962.
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  • From LaBibliographe on September 29, 2008
    Yum, I always like Lucius in casual clothes (less to pry him out of - heh, heh). OMG, who was Hermione
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  • From GammaOrionis on September 29, 2008
    That was wonderful. You do the best Lumione oneshots!

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  • From voraciousreader on September 29, 2008
    Beautiful, as always, but the boyfriend is 300 miles away and it's raining right now. (serious pouting) I hate cold showers.
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