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By : LyonsOwn
  • From ANON - Anon on November 19, 2008
    ok finally read chapters 17 & 18 sheesh I'm behind but I'm glad I waited and read both becuz u would have died if u left me hangin like dat lol any who overall stella chapters I especially like the way Harry got Jude lmao ...I can understand his anger for sure ... and to hear wat almost happened to Anne ...smh some ppl ...I wanted to go kill em myself ... but TY Draco is gonna b iight cant wait for 19 u did gud love ~ mwah and a whole plate of cookies ( chocolate chip ) ;)
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  • From on November 18, 2008
    Wonderfully done...I just absolutely love this fic.
    Im so glad Draco was saved...
    Cant wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Robertson on November 17, 2008
    Firstly, let me say this is an excellent story, certainly good enough to check up on every couple days (and you are definitely the most talented faithful updater I have ever followed). Your writing is believable and fluid, it is obvious you care about and take a good amount of pride in your writing. The only inaccuracy I have come across is a tiny thing, in chapter 12. You have a very well argued point with Abraham's sacrifice, unfortunately, this appears in the old testament. The disconnect is that you then identify the killer as paralleled by Judas, a specifically New Testament figure. The easiest fix is that you introduce Abraham's sacrifice of Isaac as a Judeo-Christian idea, not just a Christian. From there, you can work through maybe one or two clues to reach the specifically Christian influence, and from there, Judas.

    But, again, in characterization, continuity, and style, your writing is clever, intelligent, believable, and (most important and without question) yours. No one else could have written this story and that's what keeps me coming back. I'm an infrequent reviewer due to the fact that people have misinterpreted my comments as insulting, but I got the feeling you would want to know your readers' confusion, so that you can choose to proceed with many points of view, rather than merely your own. And really, a paltry few paragraphs in an extensive story? You're doing a great job, I'm only nitpicking because you give me nothing to complain about :)
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  • From on November 17, 2008
    Another great chapter and I hope everything goes well for too.
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on November 17, 2008
    Thank you so much for updating. Excellent job on making the list of injuries realistic as well as Anna's trauma. Please continue to update in a timely manner when convenient for you.
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  • From ljeanne134 on November 16, 2008
    Well, we can officially stay friends since you didn't let hir die! :-)

    Chapter one for me, though relatively short, is done. I've made a noticeable tweak in what we talked about, but I think it will work nicely.

    I really hope that you're feeling better because I miss talking to you!

    Can't wait for the next chapter. ~LJL
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  • From ANON - qwerty on November 16, 2008
    Aw. Blaise's speech at the end was so heart-warming!
    Great chapter! I'm glad that Draco won't sustain any major damage.
    Keep going!
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  • From AkumuSutaRaito on November 14, 2008
    It was really no problem to review every chapter - you certainly deserved it. The highlights of this chapter were when Draco rolled hir eyes in the beginning, and when sie gave 'Judas' that enjoyable dressing down. And I'm pretty evil for saying this, but I love tortured Draco (as you can tell from my story, lol) and I think you pulled it off really well. I'm just waiting for the rescue and TLC to commence (if it does, lol). As always, really good chapter and I can't wait for the next one!
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  • From ANON - Jeanne on November 13, 2008
    Neeeeeeed next chapter!!!
    I just hope that Draco's bought hirself enough time for Harry to find hir.
    Does Anna know that her vama has disappeared? If so, I'd like to know how she's taking it. Maybe Harry can comfort her some. That would be a nice little interlude, but just an idea!
    The haiku's done and part 1 of chapter 1 is almost done. Just to keep you updated.
    Keep up the great work and I hope you're feeling better! :-) ~LJL
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  • From thrnbrooke on November 13, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 18!!! Hurry Harry!!!
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  • From on November 13, 2008
    AAhhhhhhhh.....
    ...you leave me here??
    ...with such horror...??
    haha.

    ...cant wait to read more.
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  • From Dezra on November 12, 2008
    Yes Harry, Hurry!
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on November 12, 2008
    Brilliant! You've got my eyes glued to the computer screen. Please update once more when you have the chance!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on November 12, 2008
    Your review response keeps me thinking that we readers don't have everything figured out quite yet... what twist are you going to throw at us this time?
    Well-written chapter. I love the speech that Draco gave at the end in true Malfoy-form. Bravo that he could still pull that off after all that torturing.
    Keep going!
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  • From on November 12, 2008
    Not really but I hope so and this is another great chapter.
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