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  • From thrnbrooke on November 06, 2008
    Sooo soooo soooo love this!!! I'm dying for chapter 16!!!
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  • From on November 05, 2008
    I like orifices... they are good...love the scene. I think I shivered...oooo.

    Trouble on its way...no, say it isnt so.

    ...as always....
    I cant wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 05, 2008
    AWESOME STORY!!! Gives me the tinglies...tehe. But can you describe to me Draco's anatomy. Doe sie have a female sex organ and a male one?
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  • From ljeanne134 on November 05, 2008
    The current version of the haiku is this:
    "His heart's of the third
    Their passion so misguided
    Empathy yields peace"
    Though I fear it may be too abstract.
    Oh! And Luna will be a major feature, especially at the beginning.
    I think it's really going to just more-or-less jump in right from the get-go. I'm not a huge fan of long, introductory yarns.
    Scene 1: Gryffindor Common Room to Prefect's Bathroom, enter Luna

    That's all you're getting right now!

    PS. Loved the chapter, but I was a little confused as to whether or not Draco disappeared, then this last chapter was what happened before the disappearance or if sie disappeared, then came back and the latest chapter happened. Did I miss something in my excitement that there was more to read? I'm impressed that the Resonance had Draco so entranced that sie didn't comment on Harry ripping hir robes. :-D
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  • From on November 05, 2008
    Another great chapter and I can not wait for more!
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  • From redcrusader on November 05, 2008
    An excellent story that has captivated me from the summary. I waited to review until I read the 14 current chapters in their entirety. I'm so excited for an update especially with the cliffhanger you left your faithful readers with. I was also curious: how do you pronounce the words "sie" and "hir"? I've been attentive to the words, but I don't know if I'm saying them correctly to myself. I would like to commend your knowledge concerning police tactics and terminology, especially in the wizarding world. You really broadened the ideas about Dumbledore and the teachings of Hogwarts. I'm disheartened, in a way, that J.K. Rowling didn't attack her novels with the same objectivity you have. You are clear in your conviction, and just as clear with the counter-point. You have REALLY done your research well and still maintain a captivating and engaging story. I normally don't read "gender-bender" type stories, but your talent far outshines many of the fan-fiction stories I've read and I've really come to fall in love with these characters all over again. I will tell you that it's been driving me crazy thinking about who Anne's birth parents are...I have a sneaking suspicion that those people who know about Anne and the circumstances surrounding her birth and life are the ones responsible for the killings.

    I would like to add that you do a fantastic job of keeping the story flowing in a fashion similar to noir or femme fetal stories -- I will admit that I am still suspicious of Draco, even with the 14th chapter but only because he's always scheming about something. Draco is very much the femme fetal in this story and I adore his scenes with Harry tremendously. Harry is so composed and smart, but utterly falls to pieces around Draco. How sweet.

    Thanks for writing! Please keep it up.
    -Mike
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  • From thrnbrooke on November 04, 2008
    Soooo need chapter 15!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 03, 2008
    AUUUUUGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dat was just MEAN!!!!!! A week later when Draco disappeared from the grounds of Heritage House, Harry had never been so glad for Hetty
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  • From ANON - qwerty on November 02, 2008
    I just read your entire story, from start to this last evil cliffie. ARGH! I so need the next chapter!
    This is an amazing story. Very original. Great job!
    update!
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  • From on November 02, 2008
    Thanks for another great chapter.
    'Trouble magnets' isn't even close to what these two can get into.
    And I just cant wait.


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  • From on November 02, 2008
    Thank you for that.

    Another great chapter and I do love this story!
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  • From ljeanne134 on November 02, 2008
    Pleeeeeeease don't let Draco be hurt too badly (I'm assuming that you won't be whipping out some completely unbelievable deus ex machina to completely protect hir from harm)!

    I like Pendleton. She's good for Harry in the ways that you would expect Hermione and Ron to be, but aren't since they're meanies!

    Great talking to you too...and I think I've written my haiku.
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  • From Dezra on November 02, 2008
    Someday I wish that someone would write at the BEGINNING of the chapter, "A week later, he disappeared". Looking forward to finding out what happened to Draco and how they planned for it.
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on November 01, 2008
    Thanks for the excellent update! I love your story and can't wait for more t obe posted.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 31, 2008
    O.O is all I can give u ryte now ~ here is a cookie for the chapter but that ending has me a bit gob-smacked lol
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