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By : LyonsOwn
  • From on October 30, 2008
    I love this story and how it is coming along.

    I would love http://www.adultfanfiction.net/advsd/to be emailed of updates at poohnation74@yahoo.com, thank you !
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  • From rugbygal on October 30, 2008
    Wow!

    K. Now that my heart has slowed a bit (though it's still racing faster than normal), I can think enough to write.

    I have been reading this story for a few days now and was excited to find it updated today. You just made a bad day, much better. Thank you.

    This story get more amazing by the chapter. I find myself on the edge of my seat waiting for more, and perhaps not very patiently. I love the characters that you have created. You have taken the characters from the book and made them even better. They are still recognizable but they seem more rounded and real. Not many people accomplish this with all characters, usually you lose someone, but you seem to have done it. I also am growing to hate or love your own created characters very much, depending on the character.

    Overall, great story and I can't wait to read more!
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  • From on October 30, 2008
    I slipped out for a moment...back now.
    A couple chapters to read and all them drawing me in...Im hooked.
    Like that wasn't obvious from the beginning.
    Well done and wonderfully written, I so love the romantic points with Draco and Harry.
    Cant wait to Yull Ball. Hopefully nothing bad will happen...
    ...cant wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Amessis on October 30, 2008
    I'm really loving this story! So well done. I'm guessing that's on ex-auror they have now?
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 29, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 13!!! Ron needs to get over himself!!!
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  • From ljeanne134 on October 28, 2008
    Brightens my day whenever I see a new chapter! The plot bunnies have definitely multiplied and I will surely need to start writing lest my head explode. I would love to talk with you about some of the ideas that I am currently working through if you are amenable.
    I hope that Ron and Hermione get their heads out of their collective arse, but that would take something major.
    And I simply adore Draco in your story. The Draco from the books is still there, but...fuller somehow.
    Huzzah!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 28, 2008
    the letter beautiful....the assessment with the bible and this killers screwed view of it point on and wow why do most killers use parts of the bible to say they rright just blows my mind ...smh... Ron needs a slap ...nuff said lol till ur next chapter heres my cookie for u ~ Mwah ~
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 26, 2008
    ahhhhh!!!!!! Love this chapter y u stop b4 the punch RON deserves it so does Seamus stupid pricks lol and the inside about Mr. Davis!!!!!! haha I love it!!!! ok no more gushin cant wait 4 me I'm so excited lol ~ Mwah again gr8 chapter love
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 26, 2008
    I am so proud of Shackelbolt( however u spell his name) for listenin!!!!!!!!! he gets much applause I cant tell u cuz the rest :@ prob wont I havent read chapt. 11 yet but they dont fill me with much hope ...smh
    ty for the indept expaination from and outsiders pov and it gettin thru to a born and raised wizard who was ignorant :) another hug and Mwah just 4 u
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 26, 2008
    Soooo need my fix!!! Gotta have chapter 12!!!
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  • From on October 25, 2008
    Another great chapter...and again, cant wait to read more.
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  • From Rakel on October 25, 2008

    Absolutely perfect! Ron and Seamus getting taken down a peg or two was a beautiful sight. Hetty's verbal slap down was pure poetry! Good on Harry, as well, for telling Hermione off. Were he gets his patience, I'll never know.
    The political element that was introduced in the last chapter and continued in this one has piqued my interest. Will you be bringing Arthur in anytime soon to get his point of view?
    On the subject of Darco and Harry's relationship, I think that you are handling that just fine. To have them rush would not fit well with the tone of the story nor the personalities that you have gifted them.

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  • From Rakel on October 24, 2008

    Thank you for another well written and enlightening chapter! I was impressed with Harry's speech. Hopefully, he won't receive too many Howlers. Although I've bad mouthed Ron a few times and wouldn't mind someone kicking his ass, I honestly hope that he stands behind Harry this time. I guess we'll find out soon enough!
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  • From Toddy on October 23, 2008
    Another interesting episode. I think there was an amount of drum beating going on?
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  • From Kaen on October 23, 2008
    This story is amazing!
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