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  • From Sheree on October 05, 2008
    I love Helene. Harry deserved everything she said to him. Also the question is valid. If it hadn't been Draco would Harry have been faster in protecting and defending him? It's about time for Harry to have to face and deal with his own prejudices.
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  • From Sheree on October 05, 2008
    I like this first chapter. Shows the hypocrisy of the Light side. They are so quick to condemn Draco and other purebloods for their bigotry and ignore their own. Hope they get shown up for it.
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  • From Rakel on October 02, 2008

    A very impressive second chapter! I re-read the exchange between Helene and Harry; it's brilliant! I noticed it in the first chapter and it remains true for this one as well: you're quite skilled at fleshing out your characters. I really like Helene (and her sarcastic wit!)and hope she is more than just a minor character.
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 02, 2008
    Almost feel sorry for Harry! Though he did bring that on himself! He needs to get it together! Personal feelings aside! Sooo need chapter 3!
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 01, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 2!!!
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  • From hilfreak on September 30, 2008
    It sounds like its going to be an interesting story. Please update soon.
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  • From Rakel on September 30, 2008

    If the first chapter is the measure by which to judge your story, I'll be following it to the very end. The writing is sharp and intelligent, and your characters well defined, especially since they've only been introduced. I'm intrigued with the idea for your story and look forward to learning more about the Triarii (and meeting Draco, of course). Your story is off to an excellent start!
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