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Reviews for Never Too Much

By : Rettavex
  • From LadySybylGrey on October 17, 2008
    No, no runny eggs please! More of this? ooooohh yeeeaaaahh.
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  • From ANON - anon on October 17, 2008
    Excellent! Love it.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on October 15, 2008
    Yay! The 2nd chapter! I've been waiting for this!!
    Awesome job! I love you writing style. I can't wait for the next chapter!
    Keep going!
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  • From ANON - harrysgurl22 on October 15, 2008
    NO RUNNY EGGS PLEEAASSE!!!!!!I am enjoying this story. Please continue, or at least bring it to a decent ending. I hate to be left hanging.
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  • From voraciousreader on October 15, 2008
    This is a new ship to me, but I would like to see more of it, please!
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  • From Jan on October 15, 2008
    In a way I feel for Luna... but I can't help the fact that I feel, I feel like in a way Harry is betraying Severus. True he said he accepted it, but it's like Luna thought, Severus would do and accepted anything as long as he got to stay with his husband and children's. Harry's Amoral seems more interested in Luna then it is in Severus. Please correct me if I'm wrong, but for what I gather from chapter one and two, is that is Amoral is more interested in Luna then Severus, and it is Harry's human side that is interested in keeping Severus, and Luna, which still makes me think that after/if Luna agrees to this relationship, that maybe at the beginning Harry is going to forget all about Severus. Will he, even though I know that he loves Severus, will he unconsciously neglect Severus? Will things be as they were before or will the Amoral start to reject Sev, cause he no longer needs him?

    Please update chapter 3 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on October 15, 2008
    I'm so loving this....the tension, the realism, and sensuality. I love the way you're portraying Severus...he's not weak, but he's a respectful loving sub who also has dignity and pride. I'm glad he made things clear to Luna and Harry. BTW that scene between him and Harry was hawt just because of the words "None come to you except through me". Gatekeeper indeed and I love that Harry knows and accepts that. That's real love right there. I also love that it's all out in the open now and Luna can't really hide behind a facade of friendship now. When Harry came to get her...OMG. ::::fanning self::: Your Harry is SO freakin' delicious!!! He's everything a Dom should be and I love how he came at Luna...The whole making her cry scene was just captivating and I'll be rereading that...you have quite a way with words. I hope Luna comes to her senses and realizes that she belongs with them, she'd be quite mad to turn Harry down : )
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  • From ANON - reba on October 15, 2008
    Well, I do so love playing with food ;-))
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  • From ANON - sexysarah on October 12, 2008
    Oh, this is most excellent! Love your stories very much! I can't wait to see what kind of reactions Gabe will have to finally having his Muna there! (Kids are so perceptive!) Even more excited to read how they will all come together! Keep up with the wonderful story!
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  • From dawnangel on October 08, 2008
    OHHH I love it, I can't wait to read more. Thanks for writing,

    Dawnangel
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  • From gingercat on October 07, 2008
    This is the first of Your stories I have read, and I am enjoying it VERY much. I am new to this site, and I would LOVE to know how to get notices of favorite stories being updated.....Like THIS One!! Harry and Luna is quite a refreshing change!!
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  • From kawaiiyashie on October 07, 2008
    this is getting good i like the fact that you're bringing in luna some how i see her with them. so could you please e-mail me when you update.
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  • From ANON - Hine on October 07, 2008
    Awesome! Can't wait for more! I'm not usually into the M/M/F thing, but when it involves Luna and Snarry? How can I not? Oh, and Luna should totally get pregnant and add a little girl to the family
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  • From ANON - qwerty on October 06, 2008
    Awesome start to the sequel. Hopefully it will be as long as the original!
    Great chapter!
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  • From Darkless on October 06, 2008
    Oh yes! Go for it.
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