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Reviews for Clarity

By : chenzo412
  • From dougal74 on October 24, 2008
    A good start. I shall review indepth once I have caught up with your story.
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  • From tommye on October 22, 2008
    This story is going great so far. Carry on uploading.

    Cant wait to read more.

    Please update very soon.

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  • From Mishka on October 21, 2008
    Well, such a lovely contrast to when he and Ginny had sex. Rock on. I was thinking it would be such a funny kick in the arse to find out that Ginny was infertile though, and that Hermione was very very fertile XD. I hope Mione's pregnant. That would be something very nice for Harry to come home to. Though when Ron mentioned that Ginny was going out for the night I had the immediate thought that she'd be getting drunk and laid and winding up pregnant with someone else's child (which would be so shameful if it came out with all the prophecy and expectations around), but that is ruined by my hopes for her infertility. So I guess I'll have to wait and see what you do. Though I was wondering why Harry had to go on this trip if he doesn't need to find the Horcruxes--is this just a catch all if Ginny isn't pregnant?
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on October 20, 2008
    It was diffantly a moving moment. I hope we get to see more before he leaves. Can he take her with him???? Let me know =)

    OH and it was moving to see ron, luna, harry and hermione as they sad goodbye after their get-together.
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on October 19, 2008
    I think you are moving to slow with them, but it would be a beautiful moment if they made love the night before he leaves. Is he still leaving with Ginny? He is being thick headed towards the new prophecy.
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on October 18, 2008
    I am glad he waited to break up with her before making love to hermione. By the way don't let my user name fool you. I made it up after reading book 7, after discovering harry potter fanfiction and now my favorite character is hermione with about anybody. BUT mainly with hermione. After reading the books, i think jk should have paired hermione with harry.

    Now I can't wait, I just hope ginny isn't pregnant, hermione is destinted to have his baby. (please......=).
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  • From angelnomiko on October 15, 2008
    wow i gald he told her and got rid of ginny .. but i would be funny is ginny was pg but with someone else baby ... please please update soon ... later for now

    angel
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  • From tommye on October 12, 2008
    wow. haha. harry moves fast doesn't he. but i loved it.

    i can't wait to read more
    please update very soon
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  • From angelnomiko on October 10, 2008
    wow that was awsome .. i hope ginny and harry breack up soon and that giny is not pg .. please please update soon .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on October 09, 2008
    I so can't wait for more. I can't wait for it the truth to come out. I am enjoying your story. Keep writting.
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  • From gweasley on October 08, 2008
    I don't know if it was another oops but the end of the chapter ends in the middle of a word. Besides that good job please update Fast. I can't wait till he relises what he needs to.
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  • From gweasley on October 08, 2008
    is there a reason you posted the same chapter twice???

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  • From tommye on October 07, 2008
    That was a great start to a great story. I cant wait for the bit where Harry and Hermione finally get together.

    Can't wait to read more
    Please update very soon
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  • From lily69 on October 06, 2008
    Wow, great story so far! I like that it isn't a typical story line. I'm looking forward to reading more!

    I wonder what mayhem would ensue if he got Ginny pregnant before he made his move with Hermione and then found out only after he had already impregnated Hermione! Hmmm... However you unravel this story, I am certain I will enjoy it!
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