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Reviews for The Unseen

By : Kooldragon400
  • From MalfoysBitch on July 05, 2009
    Just read up to chapter 4!! Cant wait to read more!! Completely love this story already!! And James! WOW! HOT!! Keep up the amazing work!!
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  • From margaritama on July 05, 2009
    DAMON - the little bastard. Oh my, now he's murdering students? The little monster. I hope Orion senses something...how could no one have suspected the broom was tampered with.....ARGH! Love the snippets of Draco/Hermione (want more *pant pant* decisive, darkish/dommish/hottish Draco *drool drool*).

    Oh my James, come on babe - start to look harder -- you hot thing you. I'm sure someone needs to suspect it wasn't a suicide. Come ON Hermione!

    Sorry D: I so love this damn story.
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  • From dragongirl on July 05, 2009
    Wow!!! This is getting to the part that I love most... More intrigues, more attacks and a romance in the air... Lovely, please keep them coming..
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  • From ANON - LolaDiBlack on June 27, 2009
    OMFG!!! I missed you soo much!! eeeep I'm so freaking excited!! ok...ok...ok let's review


    Chapo 21

    I loved the fact that Draco and Mione went on that non-date, behaving like highschoolers haha well they didn't really had the chance back on the day. it was very cute that they had a great time even if they didn't kiss.

    And Poor Rome!!! I don't know why but I dont think the mean girl has any fault here humm first Tobias now Rome, some stinky fish is around.


    Chapo 22

    Squeaky James, now that is hilarious that is what happen babe when you run that pretty little dirty mouth of yours (you know I love you James)
    but you are very nosy sometimes.

    hohoho, skull fuck, really? dirty little mouths are loose and a chocolate junkie are you even serious? hahaha better not to mess with his choco dosis huh? Orion needs rest poor thing (need a bed, I'll leave you some space, sorry James but I need some action too, still love you though) ummm well and Rhea dear I sure think you'll get the hang of it, Hermione and Sevvie have consparation theories huh? Paranoid Punks
    well love it all...

    and love you
    glad you are back
    take care
    update soon
    and please please don't dissapear again

    Love
    Lola
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  • From dragongirl on June 23, 2009
    Keep them coming is almost (I think *sigh) in a very important pick..
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  • From prayspivey on June 23, 2009
    I love this story its so different. They should make a movie like this lol. I think Phelan has some like of love for Rhea. I hope they get together. i know his way older then her,but hey things could happen.
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  • From starrynite45 on June 23, 2009
    It's been a long time since I read this fic! I thought you'd forgotten to update for us all!

    Well, I actually like wolves play time. It gave the new light about werewolves things in fic. Also, will it be anything blossom between Rhea & Prof. Greyback? Hehe. That would be lovely.

    Overall, I like this latest chapter and looking for more update!
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  • From margaritama on June 23, 2009
    I'm taking this by sections:

    HERMIONE: I LOVE that Hermione's smarts will not be wasted. I was waiting for her to make the connection and just jump right in like the old Hermione - YEAH, she's BAAAACK. HOT! Snape is usually more observant...what's up with that? Come on Sev....it's your damn school. Get on the ball! Think like . . . well . . . SNAPE!

    MASTER/JAMES: You really have me hooked here, who is the master? I want to say Lucius but I think it might be too obvious and you don't do obvious...you do "walking on a rug, pulling it under your feet then, crap, that's not even a rug". I know you left clues and I'm working it out in my brain. James is such the leader and I love how he's taking on the weight of the world on his shoulders. But he's made connections despite not knowing how and who the spy is. He needs to think more deviously - and not assume the students are innocent. Also, has he given any thought to his beloved Draca? I think he'd go BALLISTIC if anything happened to her.

    LYCANS: Damn, the skull fuck line was fantastic. I love the connection between the lycans...they are so wonderful together...you have the makings of a pack here. The transformation was well-written and did I sense Rhea liking our hottie Phelan? mmm mmm good.

    DRACO: thanks for responding that he won't be a mushy softy....kill me now if he is. I love hot, dommish, Slytherin Draco (coupled with the fact that perhaps he hasn't had sex in a bit since he's single and not the type to just sleep with any slag)....oh, can I be Hermione.... :-)

    EXCELLENT CHAPPIE!
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  • From angelnomiko on June 23, 2009
    lol that was great and you are right they are sexy and wolf paly time is allway good to have ... and will mione and sev figure out how who is trying to hurt them .. please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Niccy on June 23, 2009
    I'm reviewing I'm reviewing lol. Can't wait to see where you will take this next. Am still trying to figure out who the spy is. Will Hermione figure out that the younger staff are a part of the Unseen??? I enjoyed reading as usual. Keep up the good work.
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  • From angelnomiko on June 21, 2009
    ohh man wha is james going to do .. please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From dragongirl on June 16, 2009
    WOW I love James and what he did for Hermione, I love Draca/James pair, and all the others but we need some cracking up here... Poor Harry he feels so guilty of what James had bee through! Please do not make us wait for long and keep them coming.
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  • From ANON - Niccy on June 16, 2009
    I can't wait until you update again. I'm really enjoying your story and the characters. Keep up the good work.
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  • From distinctlyME on June 16, 2009
    Oh MY giddy goodness you're back!! *squealsss*
    I was so surprised to see this updated, and happy too!
    I liked this chapter, its advancing on everything. I just wish I could understand why taking down the Unseen is so important.
    I enjoy having the mystery though. It keep my interest, because I NEED to know what happens. I'm such a curious little one!!

    Well I'm glad to hear your feeling better and I hope you continue writing.

    xoxo
    dM
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  • From margaritama on June 16, 2009
    I like this nervous Draco but don't let him get mushy damn it. Oh Hermione, he's not Ron...

    WTF? Why are my Unseen hotties getting their asses kicked. I protest in their name? I hope everyone is okay.
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