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By : Kooldragon400
  • From smmz79 on October 17, 2008
    yeah you updated... james is very perceptive... and harry is blind he does not see what is right in front of him.... hopefully ginny or someone will be able to help hermione get out her mess of a marriage... i am interested to see how draco comes into this and i am excited to see more of james group and what they are doing at hogwarts.. great job... i can not wait for the update
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  • From RyGirl824 on October 16, 2008
    Oh! I'm hooked.
    More, please!
    I really really hope Mione is ok! Was is Ron? The way she responded when James mentioned him makes me think he was behind her condition....
    More more more more pleaseeeee!???
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  • From AndreaLorraine on October 14, 2008
    So why is Harry being a dickhead? It better be some reason like he feels like he failed James or let him down by allowing him to be kidnapped. Otherwise, well, I have no patience for mean!harry.

    But hey, being a dickhead seems to be the theme of the week for men, so... *sigh*

    I hope Hermione's okay and that Ron wasn't the cause of her condition.
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  • From smmz79 on October 14, 2008
    oh wow what a full chap... so why is harry and james so distant it is not like james asked to be like this... i was wondering what happened and how he got this way that is very interesting and i am sure the mystery wizard will make an appearance in this story... i wonder who did this to james, there are sooo many possibilities... and poor hermione why do i have a feeling that ron did this to her... great job i can not wait for your next chap... this is very interesting so far but all of your stories are very good... ooohhh will bella be in this one i LOVE the way you write her she is hysterical... i have a feeling that ron may be a big part of this story???? maybe i am grabbing at straws???
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  • From kazfeist on October 13, 2008
    Interesting story, so far....I wonder who modified James' DNA? And who the Master is? Hope the injuries to Hermione are not as severe as they first seem. :D
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  • From bananasforyou on October 13, 2008
    want more! i soooo love it. james half dragon? nice
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  • From smmz79 on October 10, 2008
    OMG yeahhhh.. I loved it... great first chap... i loved the beginning with the dragon and the rabbit.... i wonder what this group is up to...
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  • From Citten on October 10, 2008
    oh!....okay totally cool i really like it so far, but i have to say that i am glad that you are taking it slow so i can work my brain around this. dont get me wrong i love the plot but getting the charaters and time straight will take some time. :) so on a better note i love the angnimnas (sorry bad speller!) part of this story! :) i do hope that you will be explaining lots more so i can follow along in the story.
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  • From LolaDiBlack on October 09, 2008
    Ohh I like it I wanna know whats gonna happen so please please please update soon
    and take lots of care

    Love
    Lola
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  • From bananasforyou on October 09, 2008
    i really like it!
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