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By : GammaOrionis
  • From ANON - happybunny on November 14, 2008
    Grrr! Would he just kiss her already? Though you do a wonderful job explaining why he won't. He tried to stab himself? A Slytherin going against his innate sense of self-preservation. Wow, does he have it bad. And poor Draco. What a tough spot to be in. If I were him, I would have hexed Ron and Harry into next month.
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  • From jracklesfan77 on November 13, 2008
    I enjoyed the previous story and Only Time was on my list. I don't know if your work is posted elsewhere, but I rare come to AFF and so wasn't aware of Only Time's existence.

    Is there some way to be alerted to updates? In any case, I hope to find this story again with more chapters in it :D I adore LM/HG fics :) Thanks for sharing!
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  • From jessirose85 on November 10, 2008
    Please try Lucius xxxx

    I want her to wake up and be with him xxxx

    Beautiful writing
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  • From ANON - blufalcon on November 10, 2008
    Your stories are just awesome !!! I just don't know how you could end this last chapter like that !!!! Lucius needs to get over himself and just kiss her. Please update as soon as your able. Until you do this story will stay on my mind forever wondering what will happen !!!!
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  • From Citten on November 10, 2008
    oh he wont! :) the poor soul he would rather have her in eternal sleep then wake up and leave--poor fool, he really thinks that she will leave? but is there another reason? well time will tell. i love that draco is that percepitive of his father that he know how much it means lucius to now what to have the others kiss her. (boy that just can out really lame. sorry) i am looking forward what is next! :)

    p.s. loved the expersion of 'bloodsucker' totally made me think of the twilight series! :)
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  • From ANON - Ashley on November 10, 2008
    Was worth the wait. GREAT job at dragging it out. i hate stories that go quick. Where they hate each other then within a chapter they change their mind and are married...SUCKS because that's not the way life is.

    I'm still harboring love for my first true love. He is with someone else now due to distance between us but we both love one another...I date different people in order to try to forget or move on, but alas every dream I have is of him and not the person I am with at that time.

    Sorry for the ramble. Just saying in a way I can understand Lucius not wanting to see that someone else is the person he loves soul mate.
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  • From chickaboo on November 10, 2008
    What?! Why? But...but...why? Lucius has to kiss Hermione. Gah! Get back here. I'm all flustered now. lol
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  • From ANON - Aaliyah Starnight on November 10, 2008
    Hi. I became like your biggest fan. I love your Lucius and Hermione stories and I think you rock at what you do. UPdate soon please.
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  • From pandabear on November 10, 2008
    Lucy! grow some balls and kiss the girl!(sha-la-la-la dont be shy!)
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  • From HermioneMalfoFan on November 10, 2008
    He did not kiss her! Oh he's sooooo afraid! Cute, really, really cute!

    But did Ron honestly think that no one in the room would tell if somebody else woke her? He's so dumb... There were three (!) Slytherins in the room one of them completely in love with her, a second one with a crush and the third one despises him. Really.

    What you wrote about Draco being the only good thing he did with his life was actually very moving... Although I think you forgot one thing: his Love for Hermione. Love is always a good thing, and since he was (and still is) in love with her, that should count, too. Guess he only needs to become aware of that fact!

    And Draco did not kiss her for his fathers sake... Did he know about his father loving her before? Or didn't he? I am not sure if you mentioned that before, if you did then I am sorry to be such a crappy reader. Nice update, really. Can't wait for the update of the other story, either... ;-)
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  • From Heidi191976 on November 10, 2008
    This was great. I think Lucius is scared that she won't wake up from his kiss. I do hope that he will kiss her soon. Then he will know the truth and they can be together. If she didn't love him, she wouldn't have gone to him and been hit with the spell in the first place. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From voraciousreader on November 10, 2008
    Ron really is totally oblivious, isn't he? I hope you intended that to be as darkly funny as it was, although I felt very badly for poor Lucius having to go through such an emotionally painful experience. I can only imagine Hermione's disgust when she wakes up and finds out she's been kissed like a 'resesa-Annie' doll in a Red Cross class!
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  • From HermioneMalfoFan on November 06, 2008
    I realised that I completely forgot to review the last chapter! I am so sorry for that! I promis to be better, after all I have my new laptop now, so I can go online whenever I want!

    You're really mean, you know that? You won't make her leave him, will you? Well, if you do, then I will expect some Sevi-Action. He would not let them separate - except he wants her for his own. But that doesn't fit their relationship in the first story so (I loved Severus in there! I really did!)... On the other hand, she's so much younger then him right now. But no, he wouldn't do that to his friend...

    Hm, I must admit that since we already mailed about this chapter it's hard to write something new... But you did definitly a good job!

    What I think might be interesting is to get a bit more backround information on that guy who was hit by the spell. He must be still alive - well - asleep, since he cannot die, right? Maybe there is a cure and they will find it as they try to wake up Hermione... Plus, I just realised that since the spell was created to kill the guy should be dead. Hermione was protected by the spell Lucius put on her first, so if that wasn't the case for the man, then it apparently affects men less than woman? I mean sleeping is better than dying after all. Well, okay, he appeares to be in agony, so maybe not... Hmm.



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  • From Lauriurix on November 04, 2008
    yei another update :D

    mmmm insecure Lucius well that's quite understandable and a nice idea in general about the spell that bellatrix put upon hermione :)

    update soon! =D
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  • From HildaMalfoy on November 04, 2008
    So poor Mione is under a fairy tale like spell...evil Bella. I didn't know you knew German, or is it just that little bit. Anyways, if you do need any help in German, French, or Russian do let me know.

    My dramione bunney is still waiting for your email...I think it is in love with you...uncanny.... lol and actually it has written a few pages of the next Dramione chapter...
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