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By : GammaOrionis
  • From andarte on October 22, 2008
    Aw... its brutal leaving us there. lol
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  • From Heidi191976 on October 22, 2008
    This was great. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Avanell on October 21, 2008
    AWesome...now I'm getting both parts.
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  • From ANON - HermioneMalfoyFan on October 21, 2008
    So
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  • From ANON - maddie50 on October 21, 2008
    This version Hermione seems more affectionate toward Lucius. Ron is particularly obnoxious here. I loved him being hexed repeatedly. Harry seems to be a mature young man who is able to keep his head in stressful situations.
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  • From andarte on October 21, 2008
    It's certainly endearing how protective he is, and yet there is still that trace of the vengeful Lucius we all know and love.
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  • From Lauriurix on October 21, 2008
    mmm that ron and harry :P buggin lucius n acussing him of possible rape lol :P

    love it :D
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  • From voraciousreader on October 21, 2008
    Ok, I'll wait for it, but I'm pouting quite heavily, here. love how you have Harry being the voice of reason here, since his usual restraint is asleep in Lucius' bed at the moment! You'd think Ron would be a bit more analytical here, since he's in a major confrontation, but he doesn't seem to realize that. Again.
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  • From ANON - Ashley on October 20, 2008
    Great story as always. Maybe you can have Harry confront Malfoy's feelings...something like "a life debt doesn't make one do *insert something here*"...I dunno. Still love it though! Was great to find when I come back from a hard day in a class filled with people whose gerbil in there head has not only fallen off the wheel, but the wheel has fallen onto the gerbil and has been there for quite some time.
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  • From ANON - happybunny on October 20, 2008
    Love this story! I only started reading LMHG recently and came to AFF when I found the FF.net stories severely lacking. Since I assume most writers here are adults as opposed to 15 year olds, the quality of writing is much better.

    So, you are officially my first review on AFF.net. Oh, and in my opinion, Lucius should have left Ron lipless. Harry was actually a reasonable creature though, something not often seen ships containing LMHG or SSHG. Is Hermione unconscious or does she have some sense of what is going on around her?
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  • From LadyJMarie on October 20, 2008
    Keep up the good work, and I hope that everything goes well at the dr.'s office. *raises soda can* here's to a speedy recovery for you, and to a top-notch author.
    J.
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  • From chickaboo on October 20, 2008
    Have I told you lately that I love this story? Both of them? lol Great update, I can't wait to see what happens when Hermione wakes up. Cause before she got cursed it certainly looked like she had forgiven Lucius and still cared for him immensely...
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  • From Lauriurix on October 19, 2008
    hahah evil lucius shutting ron :D lol

    woah cool :P im curious to know what spell did bellatrix wanted to hit Lucius with :O

    udpate soon! =D
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  • From ANON - Ashley on October 19, 2008
    Yeah it is no fun at all...i keep hobbling places like I am Mad eye or something! NO FUN! Hopefully they sort you out right. While I love your writings I do not think writing should be physically painful. I'd rather have you well than enjoy your stories no matter how much I look forward to them throughout the day. Class....great way to pass by time until the doctors office opens!
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  • From ANON - maddie50 on October 19, 2008
    I am quite comfortable in let's hate Ron land. He drives me round the twist. So, Narcissa is out of the way. We just need to figure out what Hermione is cursed with.
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