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By : GammaOrionis
  • From wishywashy on November 23, 2008
    lucius is such a whiny sap in this fic. i prefer him a bit more mean. still i like this. i enjoy the angst. the writing is good. and i always read a new chapter as soon as i see it is available. i look forward to the results of that kiss.
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  • From HermioneMalfoFan on November 23, 2008
    Okay, although this is actually a huge cliffhanger it only feels like a little one. This is a Hermione/Lucius fic after all, so if she doesn't wake up it would mean that she's destined for somebody else. AND I DON'T BELIVE THAT.

    He has to drink to get the courage to kiss her? Men, I tell you! They are so predictable in most ways! What you wrote about the sniget was just beautiful. Where is it from, or isn't it a "real" citation? I found it very moving and fitting for the occasion. I guess that Hermione will be very much like the bird... Flying away at first, but coming back when she realises that freedom doesn't always mean happiness, too...

    Nice update!!!
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  • From happybunny on November 23, 2008
    Grrrrr!!! Loved Lucius' monologue, but didn't you forget something? Like the next 1000 words?

    Only thirteen weeks asleep? Lucius got over his stubbornness pretty fast, didn't he? The comment about Draco and Lucius' roles being reversed was good and brings up the issue of family roles getting torn to shreds throughout the course of events. Draco actually seemed very mature in this chapter.

    I really hope you update soon, but you already update very regularly, so I suppose I oughtn't complain too much. Thanks for the chapter!
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  • From chickaboo on November 23, 2008
    Oh you are too cruel. He finally kisses her and you leave it at that?! Get back here! Please? Pretty please? With sugar, whipped cream, and a cherry?
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  • From ANON - Linneh on November 23, 2008
    Very nice ;) Can't wait to read the next chapter!!
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  • From VampireSeductress on November 22, 2008
    Update soon! I love this story.
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  • From Citten on November 21, 2008
    that was a wonderful chapter! i loved it! :) and i love that draco was easedropping! so very slytherin. ;) so now that his son has put it to him that was maybe it will get through his thick skull! :) and he will try! :) welll i will know soon enough i supose. :)
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  • From pandabear on November 20, 2008
    *sniffle* i hope you get to feeling better while the crazies work on ya!
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  • From ANON - Linneh on November 20, 2008
    Wonderful! :) I like your story, but now I do think it's time for some more action ;)
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  • From ANON - Apple on November 20, 2008
    wow.... this chapter is really sweet... it makes my tooth ache... lol

    well.. I really like this chapter. and I would also like it very much if Lucius will give her the Kiss already... :p

    hehehe ^^
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  • From Heidi191976 on November 20, 2008
    A wonderful chapter. I hope that Lucius will listen to his son and kiss Hermione to wake her up. Then he will know if she loves him or not. I think that she does and will want to be with him forever. Patiently waiting for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Ashley on November 20, 2008
    I think we should have a secret club...only cool people who have seizures may join lol

    Seriously though, this was a great chapter even though it was a monologue. You got into the mind of what occured in normal time through Lucius' POV rather than what is "commonly accepted"...is it bad that I was sitting here the whole time one trying not to cry but trying to "will" Draco to use the Imperio on him lol
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  • From andarte on November 19, 2008
    Ugh. I can't believe you left us there! I mean I can, but I hate it. lol
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  • From Lauriurix on November 19, 2008
    awww this was like so sentimental :)

    poor Lucius :) yiikes i keep saying that everytime lol :)

    love it! and cant wait for the moment when Lucius finally wakes up Hermione, if he does ...... :D
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  • From happybunny on November 19, 2008
    Very introspective chapter. Draco has found someone else? Who?!? Or am I just blanking on something already mentioned? Well, I think, or maybe only hope, that Lucius is getting close to caving and kissing her. And I have to admit, I really didn't miss the Two Stooges. Maybe Ron could be pecked to death by the albino peacocks?
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