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Reviews for Lights of Questionable Faith

By : GammaOrionis
  • From TriniMinx on November 06, 2008
    Oh boo.
    I still don't get why she doesn't love him here, but she loves him in the other one...
    That cliff-hanger was just cruel!!!
    Just so you know :o)

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  • From ANON - Mia on November 06, 2008
    That was horrible. Not in a you can't write, or I hate where you are going with this kind of way. Just, I'm torn by reading this. I love Lucius, I pity him. But I feel such righteous indignation and fear and fury for Hermione. You are awesome love. Terrible and great.

    ~Mia
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  • From Heidi191976 on November 06, 2008
    This was a great chapter. At least Hermione tried to fight him, even though she failed. I look forward to reading more soon.
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  • From voraciousreader on November 06, 2008
    There's going to be a lot of blood on those sheets, I think, when they are displayed. Well done.
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  • From Citten on November 06, 2008
    Great so far!!! two thing: MORE and i do hope that you pick up right were you left off, and skip the good stuff. i would be disappointed if you went to the respection next and did not finish the rest of their truste. :)
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  • From Lauriurix on November 06, 2008
    oh of course we wouldn't want lucius any other way :D >:]

    that devil :D

    mmm it was an interesting chapter ;)

    wanna read more! :D
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  • From HildaMalfoy on November 04, 2008
    Aww, the wedding is done! Sniffs. So sweet...very posh Malfoy-grade attire! Love that...so next is the wedding 'night' oh poor little Hermione.... is she excited otr scared or both? What will Lucius do to her? PPlaes let him be gentle...

    My veela plotbunny is nervous...he sent you a few carrots with my email)plot bunnies can do that) and was devastated when he didnt get a reply...he now thinks he's poioned you and that you don't want to write to us. *strokes bunnny*
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  • From Phiana on November 02, 2008
    "...and the crowd went wild....WWWWOOOOOOOOO..(Loud claps and cheers)" OMG i loved it, please add more soon!!!! Really soon!
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  • From ANON - HermioneMalfoyFan on November 02, 2008
    That was a lovely chapter! I absolutely adore the way you describe the wedding. Or shall I better say bounding? I always imagined that a magical wedding should be different from a normal muggle wedding, even if JKR described Bills' and Fleurs' like a rather ordinary one.

    Also, to come back to the blood stained sheets - I figured that was your intention. It is actually a bit confusing that you think so much like me. Because those exact blood stained sheets have been floating through my head for quiet some time. Well, I guess it might not be THAT extraordinary after all, but still not something that is described often in fanfiction.

    Ron is not so wrong when calling Lucius Mr. Mental, is he now? You definitly make him seem slightly deranged in this chapter (and the last one, too). I guess you will resolve the riddle why that is at one point or the other, right? Because in my eyes that is much more than just having waited for so long!

    By the way, I don't see Lucius letting Hermione work, do you? I guess not... Hum, wizarding society IS quiet archaic. Love it. In Germany till the 1950s husbands were allowed to quit a job on behalf of their wives and the wife couldn't have a bank account on her own without his permission. Reminds me a little bit of that.. ;-)

    Oh, and I don't think she will be to happy when the spell finally stops influencing her? Even if she really wants/needs to be with him right now, she will certainly severly put out when it ceases working! Especially since Lucius did already coax those modified vows out of her! I wonder why she gave in so easily? Hmm... There might be a little subconcient wish there to bind herself to the boy she once new?

    God work!
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  • From ANON - DuchessCullen on October 31, 2008
    WOW! I hope against hope that it wasn't just the binding that made hermione passionate. At least for their first time together as man and wife it should be conscious lust and desire. Maybe have lucius show a little (or a lot *hopeful grin*) of his 'former' self so hermione can get over his domineering ways of the last few weeks ... if only for this moment.
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  • From Heidi191976 on October 31, 2008
    Another great chapter.
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  • From ANON - maddie50 on October 31, 2008
    The wedding clothes sound stunning. Ginny's part of the ceremony was a little curt. Ha ha. The bonding kiss was becoming a risque. I will be curious to see what happens next.
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  • From Citten on October 31, 2008
    that was very worth the wait! i loved the ceremony and the rings. i liked the bridge too! :) hopfully they can work on building other bridges too. so now the really fun part, the after part, do take your time to make everything in this part! :) i will be watching for this part!
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  • From catysmom1028 on October 31, 2008
    Another great chapter. Please update soon.

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  • From chickaboo on October 31, 2008
    Sigh....if only Lucius could be rational...... Yeah, right. lol Great update!
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