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Reviews for Naga Inheritance

By : TenariRose
  • From on December 11, 2008
    i also agree with harrydraco4life on both things! please make more chapters soon!( hopefully before christmas if you can!)
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  • From on December 11, 2008
    hm. very interesting. this is a very enjoyable story to read! please make more chapters soon!
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  • From dracoharry4life on December 11, 2008
    Maybe Harry, Remus, and Sirius should take a secret trip to Hogwarts. I can imagine Dumbledorks face when he loses control over the wards. They know all the secret ways in. Harry owns Hogwarts. He can go and take control of the school. That way when school starts, the portraits will answer to him and not Dumbles. Dumbles can't use the school, pictures, ghosts, or elves to spy on Harry. Plus, the bonus of the stairs or some of the doors messing with Dumbledore would just be a bonus. Harry could also use these things to make Dumbles look crazy in front of the teachers and students. Anything that screws up Dumbledore's life would just put a smile on Harry, Sirius, and Remus's face. He could even have Sirius and Remus liveing at the school with him and Dumbledork would never know, since owning Hogwarts gives them control of everything.
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  • From sanda on December 11, 2008
    good chapter
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  • From Nikte on December 11, 2008
    Hi, first of all CONGRATULATIONS on your first fanfic, I think it's great, the plot has been written may times, but I think you really have made it original, with enough twists to keep surprising me. I also think it is great how you build up the story, instead of rushing things up like other authors do. I really regreat I just started reading it now, cause I didn
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  • From dino1 on December 10, 2008
    Poor Ron. He seems to be Harry's only true friend. I hope that they make up.
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  • From thrnbrooke on December 10, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 12!!! A snake and a dragon? Will he be able to understand the dragon?
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on December 10, 2008
    well that was interesting to see. one little mistake though, the guy who sold harry his wand was named olivander not oliver. unless harry got a new wand that im forgetting about. hmmm
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  • From on December 10, 2008
    I so glad to read another chapter to this addicting tale.

    ...and of course, cant wait to read more.
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  • From DestinyDragon on December 10, 2008
    I love the new chapter!! Please update again soon.
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  • From WarpedMinded on November 07, 2008
    Ahhh!!!!!! Please write more soon.

    I am getting into it. I am glad Ron isn't bad, hmmm...is he gonna end up with another boy? I hope so...I want him, Harry, Sirius, Remus, Severus, and Draco happy!

    lol. could you email me when you do write another chapter...if it is possible?

    warpedmindedyaoi@gmail.com
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  • From ANON - luci on November 06, 2008
    @ chapter 7

    Oh sweetie. It's not hard to find a beta.
    Although I understand your frustration.
    It's difficult being new to net writing, and having people throw "useful" advice at you constantly but not actually offering to help.

    I'd be honoured to be your beta, if you're still in need of one
    (I don't know because I'm only at 7, but I just wanted to put that out there).

    I think you have a great story here, although it could you a tad bit of fine-tuning.
    Email me for details if you're interested.

    love.
    luci.
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  • From yaoified on November 06, 2008
    wonderful chapter but you may want to fix this He took those idiots Remus and Lupin with him
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  • From thrnbrooke on November 06, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 11!!! I hope Harry's wards can beat that spell!!!
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  • From Ladyroo88 on October 26, 2008
    I love it!! Do you have a mailing list? Can i be on it? calicoo1988@yahoo.om More please!!
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