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Reviews for Polyjuice

By : Dazzlious
  • From HildaMalfoy on November 22, 2008
    Wow, this is getting complicated for Lucius. What will he do? Will he pretend to be Simon till school runs out and then break up with her or own up and tell her it was him all along(which is unlikely)?

    Will she hate the child once she knows who is that father?

    Can't wait for more!
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  • From Heidi191976 on November 22, 2008
    A wonderful chapter. I look forward to reading more to see what happens next.
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  • From Rosamund on November 22, 2008
    That was more than just an interesting chapter...it was captivating how the conversation went after sex. Awesome!
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  • From catysmom1028 on November 22, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From GammaOrionis on November 21, 2008
    *hyperventilates curled in the corner*

    WHAT AN OUTRAGEOUSLY HORRIBLE THING TO SAY TO LUCIUS! For shame on her. TUY TUY! Poor Lucius; he will have to show her that he is different.

    Are you trying to give me a panic attack? You started out and ended well enough to cause a minor one...threatening me with no more Lucius ever and then having Hermione say cruel things to a very delicate Lucius Malfoy. At least, he is concerned with her knowing he is changed and not getting even with her.

    *hyperventilates curled in the corner again*

    I'm never going to be the same. I'm proud of you. This was a good searing ending for the chapter. Tragmical! (Tragically magical!)
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  • From Elphaba on November 18, 2008
    Woo-Hoo! one problem solved. And it is Malfoy just the wrong one! LOL

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  • From Elphaba on November 18, 2008
    Who would have thought I nice Snape!
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on November 18, 2008
    this was a TOTALLY AWSOME chapter, the big event. you wrote very well, now the mystry of who the father is. I can't to see what they discover, or does lucius tell all.
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  • From Heidi191976 on November 18, 2008
    A wonderful chapter. I think it is great that the truth is out there now and that Hermione is talking to her two best friends Ron & Harry again. I look forward to reading more to find out what happens. I am curious as to whether Hermione will tell Professor Snape that ron isn't the father and that she doesn't know who it is because the person used polyjuice to become Ron.
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  • From chickaboo on November 17, 2008
    So they've figured out it was someone polyjuiced. I wonder if Hermione will confide in Snape? He may know some way to help. I can't wait for more!
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  • From Rosamund on November 17, 2008
    Oh, wait till she tells them about whats his "name" and having sex, taking care of her and the baby, etc... :) That will be fun!!!
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  • From Rosamund on November 17, 2008
    That was good of them to FINALLY confront her and get to the bottom of things. Well, she did that but at least they helped confirm it. Great job!
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  • From GammaOrionis on November 17, 2008
    Disappointment is not fun. At least I was warned that Lucius wouldn't even receive honorable mention in this chapter! I OBJECT TO CHAPTERS WITHOUT LUCIUS or at least SIMON! It's not FAIR! I need Lucius. *hugs Lucius plushie* It is Malfoy's baby...just not the Malfoy they have in mind. *shakes finger at author* I desperately need LMHG time in the next chapter. I vote he comes to the school as him under some guile and meets with Hermione and teases her and lets her know that he knows she's having a BABY! *pouts* PWEASE!
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  • From voraciousreader on November 17, 2008
    I'm sure their new-found guilt is going to make the boys uber-protective and young Draco is going to spend more time as a ferret? I have to say that I laughed out loud at the idea of them planning outings around access to plumbing! So, when does 'Simon' make an appearance? He's had one near miss with the potion, will he have another? And will she tell Snape the latest so he lets up on Ron? He's smart enough to figure out who has galleons to buy the stuff.
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  • From Heidi191976 on November 15, 2008
    Another great chapter. I look forward to reading the next one.
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