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Reviews for Deus Ex Machina

By : Utopia
  • From voraciousreader on January 20, 2010
    More than a year without an update, (sigh). Utopia, we miss you!
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  • From GammaOrionis on December 31, 2008
    I want LUcius and Hermione action...it will be hot...poor Lucius...you're going to be mean to him for his first time.
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  • From ANON - Carrie on December 17, 2008
    I gotta say i am loving this story so far. I also love what you are doing with Lucius, a very interesting perspective of of his character.
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on December 17, 2008
    RE: chapter nine and previous chapters too

    I really enjoy the potential of this story.

    You have done a great job of describing the characters and giving us a sense of their personalities.

    I eagerly await further installments to this story.

    Well done--keep up the good work!
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  • From Citten on December 15, 2008
    well that was fun! :) i totally loved the name of the chapter that would not fit! :) well i totally love albus' planning and ploting i think this is going to be so much fun. okay i am now really looking forward to another chapter and i do hope that it is really soon so it will help me through finals! dear hermione i love that you have he being so proper and i really love that lucius is too! i SO want another chapter--do you have to wait to post it?
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  • From ANON - Voracious reader on December 15, 2008
    Glad you are back in business, my sympathies on the obsolete computer-thing. I have the same problem with my machine. Good transitional chapter, and you've nicely set up several possible sources of both comfort and conflict, as always. I wonder which house she'll be in? Will you just toss a dice to decide? or will she go to Ravenclaw? I always thought she should have been in that House.
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  • From ANON - Voracious reader on December 03, 2008
    Take as long as you need; we'll wait. Your stories are worth it.
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  • From LaBibliographe on November 25, 2008
    Chapter 6: Even in her bereavement, poor Hermione is beset by selfish, unscrupulous people. Now why is Corin acting so strangely? I thought it might be that he had a crush on Hermione, but you said he didn
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  • From voraciousreader on November 25, 2008
    Just re-read it all, and I'm suddenly wondering if Corin Travere had something to do with the fire, from his reactions to Hermione the day of the funeral? It would make a twist if he is in league with the irritating cousin.
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  • From voraciousreader on November 21, 2008
    re: the third time I've read it' comment--all too often, if I read a story more than once all I notice are the errors, once I've absorbed the plot and characterizations. Your stories very seldom do that to me, I've found. Only one of several reasons why you are becoming one of my favorite fanfic authors!
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  • From heather360 on November 19, 2008
    Thank You Utopia! I was swooning in anticipation for Lucius to arrive! Snape..oh...I just wanna mooch his sweet face. Good deed. *Sigh* Until next week! xoxox
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  • From LilCas on November 18, 2008
    I like please keep writing!

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  • From chickaboo on November 17, 2008
    So they've finally met. I can't wait to see how things develop....and what house she's put into. Oh and liked how you through in a little interaction with Riddle there. Clever that. lol
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  • From ANON - Rini on November 17, 2008
    -----Prologue-----

    That was really dark
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  • From ANON - Rini on November 17, 2008
    You're not auctioning off Lucius' virginity? Awwww... what a pity :(

    I'm going to read on. I look forward to some Marauder ass-kicking and Snape's happily ever after.
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