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Reviews for Deus Ex Machina

By : Utopia
  • From chickaboo on November 03, 2008
    Fantastic update! I can't wait to see where you take this!
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  • From ANON - Debby on November 03, 2008
    hey!

    another lovely chapter! can't wait to read what happens next. I wonder who her great-aunt is
    and no i'm not a doctor ^^ I'm a journalist-to-be, lol



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  • From voraciousreader on November 03, 2008
    Perhaps the French elves are dressed differently than the English ones? Rather than wearing non-clothing items repurposed, perhaps it is enough to wear a simple uniform in France as a 'mark of enslavement'? Or perhaps it is a Grangier family custom that the elves serve by choice rather than by compulsion? I can't think of anything for the vineyard elves but feedsacks or something like that. Ick. And I am very flattered you went with my suggestion for a title, which was not a dig, as the deities in question are a major influence and NOT a 'clumsy plot device'.
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  • From RavenElfwitch on November 03, 2008
    Adoring this story, can't wait to read more. The vineyard elves could use muslin, when I make home meade wine, the must is put thru muslin to strain out any bits and pieces from the fruit musch like jam is turned to jelly
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  • From ANON - HermioneMalfoyFan on November 02, 2008
    Ahm... The Anon last time was me? Just forgott to reveal myself. :-) Right, so a late review because I do have technical problems that will hopefully resolve within a week...

    Loved your update, as usual! Very nice how you inserted her in the past, this will not arise suspicion! Especially since she's adopted, I suppose she's still muggleborn? Hah, dear Lucius will not know what hit him! Suppose he will think that she's a pureblood in the beginning? Of course that would make it a lot easier for him to fall in love!

    Mother Nature and Death are quiet powerful in your story! I mean obviously they are given who they are, but to be able to turn back time... That's something else! Or is it AU? Not that it would be terribly important for the story, but I am always wondering.

    But I must admit that I find it very sad that she forgets everything of her former life. No memories of her family, Harry, Ron... That's really hard! Okay, I guess that it would be harder for her to remember them, when she has no recollection of her life before, she cannot suffer from the things that happened, but still. I guess it will it make it easier for her to fall for Lucius, too...

    Waiting for the update tomorrow... Yay...
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  • From xineweber on November 01, 2008
    Amazing!
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  • From LaBibliographe on October 31, 2008
    Chapter 4: I don
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  • From LaBibliographe on October 31, 2008
    Chapter 3: Okay, I now assume the skeletal man wasn
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  • From heather360 on October 28, 2008
    Let me start out by saying...Who would flame you? I mean really, people do this? Amazing.... I can not think of one nasty thing to say to you, snapesgoddess, Lexy Malfoy or anyone who write for the enjoyment of themselves or others. Sorry I just find it insane that you guys have to put up with that crap.

    Now for your story. BLOODY AMAZING, I LOVE IT! I will be anxiously awaiting your weekly updates. YAY FOR NON CANNON!
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  • From ANON - Debby on October 28, 2008
    hey! love the story...but...
    Healer Rosseau! I'm a Rosseau ^^
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  • From ANON - maddie50 on October 27, 2008
    Alright, not just back in time but alternate universe. I like it.
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  • From Heidi191976 on October 27, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From voraciousreader on October 27, 2008
    AS for a title, what about 'Deus Ex Machina'?
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  • From GammaOrionis on October 27, 2008
    *pouts* You wouldn't REALLY tell Severus that I am stalking him, would you? That would just be cruel. I'm sensitive and delicate!

    AND I'm technically just stalking Remus Lupin...except that he is kind of my lover, so I'm not stalking him as much as sleeping with him...Gotta love werewolves! They're soft and fuzzy...REMUS! *hugs wolf plushie*

    I need an update, but I shall patiently wait until MONDAY! Cause you threaten to tell Severus one of my passtimes. *pouts some more*
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  • From chickaboo on October 27, 2008
    Oh this is just amazing. It keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to see how this all goes!
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