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Reviews for Deus Ex Machina

By : Utopia
  • From voraciousreader on October 27, 2008
    For every ending, a new beginning, and an opportunity to do a little temporal meddling! Excellent means of slipping Hermione into the new timeline, immediately allowing her to interfere with Voldie's operations! It's amazing how often the name 'Beaumont' comes up in fanfics, associated in one way or another with Hermione. Just seems to work with her, somehow. What is her middle name, anyway? Anybody know?
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  • From carha on October 25, 2008
    ARGH!!!! How can you take so much pleasure in leaving us begging for more more more?! Great work, but not enough lol. and i still must wait for the next chapter. Keep it up hun
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  • From LadyDisdain on October 24, 2008
    Very nice., This story sure has a lot of potential! I really like your idea of a Virgin Lucius ;) I agree with the breaking of the cliches! I wonder when you will update again? I sure hope its soon. Keep up the good work!
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  • From chickaboo on October 20, 2008
    Oh this is amazing! I can't wait for more!!
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  • From Terrie on October 20, 2008
    Oh, I forgot I had an idea for a title. "Returning from the River Styx". Ok, just an idea. I know you're perfectly capable of thinking up a title. Just thought less time spent trying to decide on a title might equate into more time to write the story. XXOO
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  • From Terrie on October 20, 2008
    I'm liking it more and more. You always have interesting ideas. Ok, anybody out there know Utopia's weakness. Is it lemons (I make a killer lemon pound cake), strawberries, expensive perfume, fine wine, drop dead gorgeous men (ok, I already knew that one). I think I heard Wormtail in the walls last night. Maybe I can send him over to spy. Sigh! I guess I'll just have pour myself that glass of wine & continue to live vicariously through your stories.
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  • From Heidi191976 on October 20, 2008
    This is an interesting story. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on October 20, 2008
    Oooo, Doctor Who is amazing, which is kinda bad for me to admit, my ex used to rib me for it! I'd settle down on a Saturday night to watch it on BBC One, and he'd just laugh at me! Oh, so now I'm guessing that the man with the Scythe is Death himself or Morpheus, or infact some sort of God. At first I thought the little girl was Hermione herself. Actually I still think that a little. I'm glad in some shape or form, Hermione escaped her horrific death. Can you actually AK yourself? I've wondered about that for a while....

    So the song seems to be a major give away, oh I did like it! I'm glad it's not going to be all darkness, and no light. I must admit I was disturbed by Voldemort, but alas it is to be expected of him if he won the war. I think in his extreme madness, he probably would have done those things, but never the less, it was still unexpected, but I liked the horror factor, when I was reading it.

    I'm looking forward to more Sweets! Great chapter!

    ~LadyVoldemort87~
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  • From xineweber on October 20, 2008
    Looking forward to the next chapter :)
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  • From ANON - maddie50 on October 20, 2008
    Interesting beginning.
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  • From voraciousreader on October 20, 2008
    Ok. 'Train wreck' no more! You have an excellent grasp of archetypes and their possible functions, even of motivations. Makes a hell of a lot of sense that Gaia herself would intervene if Volsie is killing the planet itself. Now you've got me reeled in. I honestly wasn't trying to be insulting in my last review, I simply couldn't find any other simile to describe how that first chapter made me feel.
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  • From ANON - HermioneMalfoyFan on October 20, 2008
    Well, the novel-length review above is mine... I forgot that I wasn't loged in, I still don't have a new computer!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 20, 2008
    Oh, you got me there! Hell, sometimes it
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  • From GammaOrionis on October 20, 2008
    I am needy! *begs* This may have escaped your notice, but American's are far from patient...though that may be more of a personal short coming than a short coming of the country as a whole. You just want to punish me, don't you? I'm proud of you. Your cruelty is inspiring.
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  • From GammaOrionis on October 15, 2008
    YAY! WAITING FOR MORE! PLEASE!
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