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Reviews for Deus Ex Machina

By : Utopia
  • From voraciousreader on October 14, 2008
    Vivid, literate as always, and disturbing. Not sure if I'm going to keep up with this one or not, but who doesn't watch a train wreck? I really do need to see where you're taking this, so I guess I'll keep reading. I'm not flaming you, dear, just not sure what to say.
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  • From carha on October 14, 2008
    Wow, definately not been done before. You have stumbled upon something very interesting and with a lot of potential. Looking forward to your next update
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  • From ANON - HermioneMalfoyFan on October 14, 2008


    You're simply evil, you know that? Really dark, but okay you warned us. And to be honest, I enjoyed it (maybe I am darker than I like to admit? well, I already know I am mean - at least that's what my friends say - but I never thought of myself as well, dark)! Although I am wondering how does she go back in time? Was it Lucius who send her back? (Well, I just assume it was him she "met"? Might be Draco as well but since it's a Lucius Hermione story I suppose it must be Malfoy Senior...) But, on the other hand if she went back in time, how is it possible that the death eaters had a body to ravage? And whad did him make confort her? I mean you described him kind of devasted, so I suppose that he is not too happy either. Maybe he has major regrets? Would be fitting especially since you wrote about rather devasting consequences of thedeath eaters politics for the purebloods, too.

    Oh, but one thing I was wondering, how many years has it been since the defeat of the Order? I am only asking because you already described the consequences of the inbreeding and the first steril purebloods.

    By the way: I don't want Lucius virginity. Who does want a guy without any experience? As long as he marries me, you can have it *LOL* But nevertheless, this is definitly a great start and the "outline" you gave us does definitly sound original!

    AND: I am still waiting for your cocktail repost! There were so many great stories in there!
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  • From LaBibliographe on October 14, 2008
    Chapters 1-2: Well, so far the wizarding world can't get much worse and I guess the Muggle world is blown away or rotting slowly. It has to get more hopeful from here, right? LOL.

    Voldemort's dark realm, especially his throne room, is very descriptive, if also disturbing, which I know it was meant to be. Nice job on the horrors of Voldie's new world. Was the handsome skeletal man meant to be Lucius? I know...I have to wait and see. It's as though the skeletal man were something like Dumbledore as he appeared to the 'dead' Harry in book 7, dressed in white. This is an intriguing, if somewhat gruesome start.
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  • From Terrie on October 13, 2008
    Not even for double chocolate fudge brownies and a foot rub?
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on October 13, 2008
    So glad you made the decision to write this, I was worried you wouldnt!!! Hope the writers block dissolves completely so we can finish up our collaborative project soon! Sooo....anyhoo...sitting here on my birthday looking for something to read and there you are!!! I am, as always anxious for you to update and will be reading happily my dear!!!!


    Hugs!

    S_G
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on October 13, 2008
    Hmm...I really don't like Voldie in this, and that's very unusual because I like him in anything no matter what he's like. Aww poor Hermione, I really do think this plot that you have fashioned could be a corker. The image of Harry that I have in my head is awful, I can see his face, as the way you discribed it. Voldemort is a very cruel wizard. I am presuming that Lucius and one of his co-horts are the ones that found her in the cave? Damn you Luci, don't you ever spot the chance to redeem yourself?! Ooooh, and the children bred to fight, sharpened fingernails, and teeth. Very Doctor Who darling, I remember similiar children/adults from the episode, funnily enough called Utopia. (What can I say, I'm a Doctor Who addict LOL, It's David Tennant, I swear I swooned when he was Barty Crouch JR.)

    All in all Utopia, I think this will be a cracking story!

    ~LadyVoldemort87~
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  • From GammaOrionis on October 13, 2008
    MORE MORE MORE! Don't be heartless. werewolfhime has deep feelings...she cries for more as she cried when Remus died...*wallows around on the floor* PLEASE! I'm done now. I want to read more of this! PLEASE!
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