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Reviews for The Potions Master's Baby

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  • From ANON - ginnyginny on November 03, 2008
    after having two myself, the first being a natural birth, i can agree with hermione... the books lie. childbirth hurts like hell. i also agree with you that you really need to experience childbirth before you can write it appropriately. can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Ink on November 03, 2008
    Aaaaaaaaaaaw don't leave us hanging!!
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  • From neelix on November 03, 2008
    Bwahahahahahaha!!!!!!


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  • From catysmom1028 on November 03, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From smmz79 on November 03, 2008
    OMG i just loved this chap... severus is so cute i love a worried severus because he is generally so calm and in control or at least that is the vibe he gives off... wow great job
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  • From voraciousreader on November 03, 2008
    Very good chapter. I like how you've made Severus so concerned and caring for her, and yet have him be a bit awkward with that fact. It makes it more believable for me. I hope you're not going to make him faint in delivery? It's funny, but a little overdone.
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  • From MomoDesu on November 03, 2008
    There are two new babies in my family, so this chapter brings back some memories and laughs for me. My cousin's wife wasn't even overdue, yet she started trying out every old wives tale in the book to induce her labor on her own; then my cousin was acting very much like Severus with the nerves. For three weeks he wouldn't even have a beer at night in fear that she would go into labor and he wouldn't be able to drive. I giggle now, but I dread the day when I am in that position XD

    Can't wait for the next chapter. This is the only story I have actually been checking back almost religiously for, even if I'm not the best reviewer in the world. Your stories always keep me entertained.

    -Momo
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  • From Heidi191976 on November 03, 2008
    Excellent. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Sheena on November 03, 2008
    Wow, con't wait till you update, baby snape is comming

    Great story, UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!
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  • From KellyJCR on November 03, 2008
    You had to end it there didn't you! Can't wait for the littlest Snape to join the story. I feel for your bladder issues during pregnancy but I had a drooling problem. It was way to hard to pass of as anything else. Looking forward to the rest. Well done!!!!
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  • From DB1 on November 03, 2008
    @16 awsome chapter. cant wait for mroe


    *DB*
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  • From ANON - Linzie on November 03, 2008
    This is really great! I just can't get enough of the story, and you are so good about up-dating! Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From CB13 on November 02, 2008
    S-G,

    Try baby oil for that silly Dark Mark. Lotions of all shapes and sizes if that doesn't work. My little ones love those darn things, but unfortunately, the better they are, the longer they linger. Good times. I nearly peed right here at the desk when I read that you made a little boy cry in the elevator. (I believe that's a sign of a bad mother on my part. Still giggling.)

    Couples showers - oh, yeah, I had one of those, and one of the regular kind, too. Girls, don't bother with the couples kind. Just skip it. Really. Your sweetie will appreciate the fact that no one else sees him go ga-ga over the teeny little clothes you show him later. (The baby's clothes! Get your minds out of the gutter...)

    I don't think my review has been very helpful - please be advised that I'm enjoying the story immensely. These pregnancy stories are tons better when they're written by someone who's actually been pregnant.

    Cheers!

    CB
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  • From ANON - vox on November 02, 2008
    We had a couples shower with our firstborn - it was fun. We had a BBQ, there were no pink frilly invites, and there were games involving BEER.

    It CAN be done properly. Everybody had a great time, it was really laid back.
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  • From Heidi191976 on November 02, 2008
    This was an excellent chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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