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Reviews for The Potions Master's Baby

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From doyoueverwonder on October 29, 2008
    omg that was so sweet. I love his waxing poetic. so cute. and sweet (swoons) why cant all men be like that. lol.
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  • From ANON - ginnyginny on October 29, 2008
    as usual, a very good chapter. i love how severus tried to convey his feelings, even though he was uncomfortable and unused to doing so. it was sweet and tender, yet still the professor that we love. i was just rereading the adventurous hearts trilogy, and had to comment...i LOVED your nickname for hermione...'minute'. it was cute, and so different, that it has continually stuck in my head. you write my 3 favorite pairs (hermione with draco, lucius, and severus) with such flair, i can't wait to read anything you put out. i am waiting for your next story, and hope that despite the emotional roller coaster the story seems to be from what you've hinted at, it will still have a happy ending like your other stories. i'm sure this most recent work has been outlet for what you've been going through in your personal life... i wish only the best for you, and hope things get better soon.
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  • From TriniMinx on October 29, 2008
    Gumbo and Key Lime pie, lol. Now that is interesting!
    It's progressing really nicely!
    Update soon :o)
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  • From ANON - makaem on October 29, 2008
    This is a lovely story. And thanks for the recipe, I'm allergic to fish and shellfish-- which are in all the gumbo recipe's I'm come across so far.
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  • From Gertie on October 29, 2008
    There's nothing I love better then a chapter that combines both food and smut. And fantastic smut at that. I loved the house elf covered in beads. You make me ache for key lime pie, especially since it has started to snow here for some god awful reason.
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  • From smmz79 on October 29, 2008
    OH wow well it was definitely worth the wait... great job!!! she is having craving this is great i loved it!!!!
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  • From triz on October 29, 2008
    very good love scene. and yes, i have to agree that it is the best that you have written. cannot wait for more!
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  • From KellyJCR on October 29, 2008
    I never in a million years would have thought that a character let alone Severus had a foreskin. I'm sure it doesn't help that I have never seen an uncircumsized penis. In all actuality I think it made the sex sound so much more natural and steamier. So kudos to you for originality. I love the fact that Severus is going for gumbo at three a.m.. I have fond memories of me and the hubby eating chili cheese dogs at 2:30 in the morning while I was pregnant with my 2nd. Can't wait for more Well done!!!
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  • From jenlaranja on October 29, 2008
    This was one of the most amazing love scenes I've ever read! I loved how you made Severus so loving and gentle, and at the same time totally insecure! I'm adoring this story, it's just so cute to read! You're doing an amazing job! I'm waiting for the next chapter ;)
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  • From ANON - CharlotteBlack on October 29, 2008
    Liking the increase in updates :)

    Chapter 12 - I thought Severus would be a little bit more grumpy after sleeping the night on the couch (he is an old man lol) but it must be a VERY comfy couch.

    Chapter 13 - Poor Hermione feeling a bit inadequate. I really liked Hermione's line: 'we're living in sin' :D
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  • From ANON - Angelbaby on October 29, 2008
    Ch 11, 12 and 13: Gorgeous and wonderful, I likey alot. I love how you write what Severus is thinking when she makes all those little comments. Wouldn't be great if we could hear what guys are thinking so we would be able to reasure them without having to guess all the time? This is the perfect Snape for me, snarky to all on the outside but unsure and slightly sweet on the inside...sigh. Congrats on finishing your new fic, can't wait to read it. I've always thought that if an author loves and is moved by something that they wrote then it has to be amazing as we are all so critical of ourselves and our work. Loving this fic can't wait to read more. hugs.
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  • From diamondmouse on October 28, 2008
    lmao that was great!
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  • From AriaDragoncrest on October 28, 2008
    Excellent as always!
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  • From Crazie4Dan on October 28, 2008
    as always i love the story. what pairing is your next story?
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  • From TriniMinx on October 28, 2008
    Aww, heheheheheh she was claiming her wizard.
    Can't wait for the next update!
    When is he gonna marry her already???
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