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Reviews for The Potions Master's Baby

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From Cliobella on October 27, 2008
    OH! So near, and yet so far. Poor Sev, he was probably hoping to spend the day in bed, not shopping. Of course, for me anyway, the idea of Severus in a Babies-R-Us is an absolute delight! I can't wait for the next chapter! Have you ever thought of doing a couple of updates a day instead of an update every couple days? Just a thought. ;)
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  • From smmz79 on October 27, 2008
    great chap... loved it... yeah hermione finally got a little bit of action and fell asleep on severus in the meantime poor guy... great job.. i can not wait to read what severus is like shopping this should be good
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  • From LadyofClunn on October 27, 2008
    This is such a wonderful tale! I loved the conversation at the dinner table. And all the action behind the blackboard. And those conflicted thoughts. And ... just everything!

    I have internet access about once a week nowadays, and when I do I just get into a copy paste frenzy and read later. So I couldn't do your stories justice by reviewing, but I assure you that your ideas and writing quality are excellent as ever!
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  • From wishyouwere on October 27, 2008
    Chapter 12 - What? No 'morning delight'? I was wondering where your update was, and was happy to see it this morning. If you want to make it up to us, you could post another one!
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  • From MariaTeresaQuintanar on October 27, 2008
    New chapter was a blast! I enjoyed the read with morning coffee. It will more than likely be the highlight of my morning. Take care and update soon!
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  • From DB1 on October 27, 2008
    @11

    great story i like it. update soon

    *DB*
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  • From Prospera on October 27, 2008
    Beautiful and fantastic. Ican'twait for the rest! Thanks for writing.
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  • From carha on October 27, 2008
    Another great chapter hun. I love that song, Bryan Adams is a wonderful singer. Looking forward to your next post
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on October 26, 2008
    A wonderful coming out, and a great song choice. Thank you for a simply lovely story, so far. And, thank you for the fast update!! HG4eva
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  • From smmz79 on October 26, 2008
    omg what a great chap... ok so i have not reviewed for a couple of chapters so i am going to make a few comments... richie is hysterical i like that he is so animated yet very powerful with the dark arts... it is easy to characterize people but honestly that may not be true at all.. also i love harrys reaction when he saw severus with hermione... 'you brought a date'... and hermiones response of glaring at him in a way to make him think she was mentally flipping him off... loved that... OMG i laughed so hard when hermione and severus exited the carriage to realize that the students were all waiting for them... that was great... and now to this chap... first off severus helping hermione with her stocking how sweet is that and then everyones reactions i like that hermione was sticking up for severus... ok now to my fave part besides the end when severus realized that hermione was meant for him.... when albus almost let it slip that he messed up the sperm... oh that was good and he was like i swear the gray lady is calling me that was good i love it... great job please update soon... :-)
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  • From amsev on October 26, 2008
    Oooh! Good song to end the chapter with. Was never one of my fave songs, however in this context, it's just lovely and makes me like it. Very nice chapter. Darn those nosy colleagues!!!
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  • From ANON - CharlotteBlack on October 25, 2008
    Chapter 11:

    Great Chapter - I really loved the Hogwarts equivalent of swapping keys with your partner - swapping passwords. I also didn't suspect the staff's reaction to the baby as of being about marriage. Hermione and Severus are very sweet together :)
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  • From TriniMinx on October 25, 2008
    Oh I love that song!
    :o)
    Update soon!
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  • From Heidi191976 on October 25, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I can't wait for the next one.
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  • From RWHandLoraineProductions on October 25, 2008
    This was a really sweet chapter. I hate the way their co workers reacted, but the students dont seem to have a problem about it. Brava for them! Looking forward the the next chapter.

    Red
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