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Reviews for The Potions Master's Baby

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From littlesirene on October 19, 2008
    brilliant chapter, a jealous snape sounds really funny.
    update soon
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  • From MariaTeresaQuintanar on October 19, 2008
    Poor Severus! He just kisses the mother of his child for the first time and already people are asking when the wedding is! Oh, and I see such trouble coming from that original character of yours. Should be interesting. Great writing and please, if you can that is, update today! If not (boo-whoo), I'm sure I can hold back my sarrows until Tuesday. LOL!
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  • From doyoueverwonder on October 19, 2008
    hahahahaha, your comment is hilarious i totally understand though, Rickman is like sex on a stick especially with that voice. oooooh. ive seen a ton of his movies and no matter who he plays its sexy. lol. now i wanna watch sense and sensibility. dang it.

    i love jealous Snape, he's so cute lol if you can use the word cute to describe him, which I doubt he would approve of. lol.
    interesting OMC. he's very curious. can't wait to see how you develop him more.

    Awesome job, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - chloe on October 19, 2008
    i sooooo.....can't wait to read more. i think you write such a good severus snape:)
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  • From Cliobella on October 19, 2008
    Did I say Sev was cute? I meant to say adorable. He is just precious when he is flustered. I also wanted to give you a quick word of support on the height difference. My daughter is five foot nothing and I
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  • From Byrony on October 19, 2008
    Great story as usual. Whenever I need a good story I go and read one of yours. I always know that I will get a happy ending... NOW you are working on a new Remus story???!!! Excellent.. chocolate frogs for you!!!!
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  • From Gertie on October 19, 2008
    Poor Severus. He needs to learn to handle the pressure of nosy friends to be with Hermoine. I love happy Harry, smiling and at home with his family. Snape should be taking notes -not that he would ever admit to doing it.

    You made me do a little happy dance with the news about the Remus fic. I am re-reading Heat for about the millionth time. I really think it is my favorite fic ever. They're really aren't enough Remus stories. But I understand how naughty little Slytherins can commandeer the imagination.
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  • From ANON - Angelbaby on October 19, 2008
    Ch-7. Oh devine kissing by the potion master. Gorgeous chapter, makes me want more, quick get to writing. Have I ever told you how much I love your Sev fics? (Yes you reply, so shut up now.) Are you able to do me a little favour? If you haven't planned to already could you write some chapters with Sev interacting with his child? Everyone stops writing after the baby is born and I would love to see him playing with his little girl or teaching his young son some potions.
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  • From ANON - Angelbaby on October 19, 2008
    Ch-6. Harry cracks me up, this is a good version of him, not angry and annoyed but at peace and happy. Good to see Interferring Albus making an appearance. Of course he would be following them around the halls making sure they get together. Hermione and Sev need to get together now before she gets too big to make it difficult.LOL.
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  • From nonentity on October 19, 2008
    Hi, I just finished your Quidditch game chapter. I love the rumor mill and the what-will-they-tell-everyone problem. Her licking his lips is hilarious. One nitpick--a writer at some point pointed out that Severus probably likes Quidditch to some extent if he's actually qualified to referee Quidditch games.
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  • From ANON - Angelbaby on October 19, 2008
    Ch-5. Ah so Hermione has fallen under the spell of hot yummy Severus. I totally understand her predicament I imagine it would be difficult for any woman to control. I love how you write this Sev. He's himself: quiet, withdrawn and sarcastic but oh so polite and sweet. Don't you think random sweetness makes it so much more sweet because it's unexpected?
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  • From ANON - Angelbaby on October 19, 2008
    Ch-4 He gave her his blueberry muffin, could there be anything sweeter?
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  • From ANON - Angelbaby on October 19, 2008
    Ch-3. "MINE" ohh yumminess. I would dream about Snape saying that to me too. The scene behind the blackboard was fab and I laughed out loud at how annoyed Severus would be at the kids thinking he was snogging behind there, ha.
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  • From ANON - Angelbaby on October 19, 2008
    Ch-2. Poor Sevvy I can't even imagin what that situation would be like. To find out someone was having your baby. He didn't even have the fun of making it. Poor Hermione what a shock that would be. The child of someone you don't even like. This is going to be a great fic, I love it already. Off to chapter three.....
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  • From ANON - Angelbaby on October 18, 2008
    Sev's going to have a baby, YAH! I love the fun way you started this fic so good to see your sense of humour again it always cracks me up (strong manly sperm LOL). Thank you for dealing with the Ron issue so well. I love everyone in Potterverse and hate when some make Ron out to be mean. The fics where he is horrible to Hermione or cheats on her suck. It's great you made them in love but now she gets to move on. Oh I know i'm going to love this fic. It's written by you and it's about Sev, how could I not?
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