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Reviews for The Potions Master's Baby

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From gtbioteach on October 18, 2008
    I absolutely love this. I held off reading for a few days - had some stuff around the house that HAD to be done. When I finally sat down to read, I couldn't stop! Your Harry cracks me up. He is so light hearted and funny.
    At many times , I have been on the verge of tears while reading. So funny!
    Severus is really cute in this story. I know he is supposed to be dark and brooding - but cute and sweet seem to keep popping into my head.
    Are we going to get a visit from the Malfoy family? If so, I hope it is the Draco and Lucius from Something in the Way She Moves or from Matched. They are my favorites.

    I love your style. Thanks for writing.
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  • From doyoueverwonder on October 18, 2008
    Holy Toledo! I need a glass of water. That was just...wow. Severus is just so sexy, I don't know how JK Rowling can't like him. I think she's crazy.
    Awesome job!!!!!!!! Love it.
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  • From ANON - smoky heather on October 18, 2008
    this is wonderful, i really like seeing another side to severus ^^ more please! -x-
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on October 18, 2008
    very good chapter. update soon!
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  • From ANON - chloe on October 18, 2008
    i lover your stories. this one is another great one in the making. can't wait to read more
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  • From Gertie on October 18, 2008
    Indeed, if Snape were to kiss me like that I would give him anything and everything he asked for. Oh swoon! I love the story so far, and I really love the characterization of Harry in this. It's nice to think of him as being a good friend and laughing with her instead of being the opposition.
    The Hermoine in my head is a hybrid of the Hermoine I originally pictured reading the books, and bits of Emma. Not quite either, just a mix.
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  • From neelix on October 18, 2008
    Oh this is just too perfect - I am loving every second - please please... post again soon!!!
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  • From KellyJCR on October 18, 2008
    I actually agree with you on Sevs acceptance of the situation. However I pose this question. Is his interst in Hermione beacsue he has never been desired before or is it the fact that he is truly taken with her? I was also surprised that I do the same thing you do as far as picturing the actors in my head. Hermione is my own impression and as far as Sev and Lu I had my own thoughts beforehand but, the actors are much better thanwhat I had in my minds eye (although Alan was not far of the mark). Can't wait for more the good stuff seems just around the corner. Well done!!!
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  • From ANON - bobbie on October 18, 2008
    damn, that was just hot..if a man ever kisses me like that he can have anything he wants...lol...damn that was good,,this is a very good story..cant wait for more..lots more..damn that was just so hot and it was only a kiss..
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  • From ANON - Sygnus on October 18, 2008
    Well Thank Goodness I have some kind of net again! HOT HOT HOT!!! Looked for you online tonight. Hugs and Kisses! Miss Ya! My gosh I NEED SMUT!!!
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  • From voraciousreader on October 17, 2008
    I agree that Snape most definitely has a sense of honor, without it he wouldn't have tried so hard to save lily, or Harry later. I saw him as a man who was bitter against himself for the mistakes he'd made and who lived in a half-suicidal state of tension for 25 years. That would tend to make one a tad irritable, I think. ;) Nice chapter (Ch 7)and I like the character development!
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  • From catysmom1028 on October 17, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From on October 17, 2008
    I'm dying over a little kiss! It was just perfect though! I really like how things have progressed slowly & we've gotten to see the "human" side of Sev. I haven't read many stories where he has moved past things that happened and gave up a bit of his heartless facade. This is a great story!!!
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  • From MariaTeresaQuintanar on October 17, 2008
    Two chapters in one day? It is Christmas! LOL! It was great. Thanks for the extra chapter and I still look forward to the Sunday.
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  • From nastygrl on October 17, 2008
    Oh wow! That was a PERFECT first kiss! And you are right, Severus doesn't have to be an ass all the time. I kind of have figured out how the 'mix up'occurred, but it doesn't really matter how it happened. More important is that it did happen. YEAH for babies!!
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