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Reviews for The Potions Master's Baby

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From smmz79 on November 09, 2008
    omg that was a great chap.... i love the connection they have here.... and i love that severus is definitely more well rounded way to go hermione they both got what they needed without knowing what that actually was....
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  • From ANON - Pickyrev on November 09, 2008
    Great story. I love the interaction between Severus and Hermione as they deal with the results of the mix up. I also appreciate your characterization of Harry. It is refreshing to see him as accepting the situation with grace and laughter instead of railing against Snape. I would suggest that you go back through to edit. I noticed quite a few errors in using plural possesives especially the use of student's (1 studnent) vs. students'(belonging to multiple students). Please also review correct punctuation for dialog. If the quoted remarks end with a period but you are going to add a tag after then drop the period and use a comma. For example: "I want that," she said.
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  • From diamondmouse on November 08, 2008
    lol that was great but i need to know the plans ! lol
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  • From on November 08, 2008
    Lovely update. Good to read Severus as a proactive parent. Thanks!
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  • From Heidi191976 on November 07, 2008
    Excellent. I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens.
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  • From voraciousreader on November 07, 2008
    Ye Gods, Sev's got a 'Mini-Me'!!! ROFL!! Just the idea of him even trying to be intimidating while baby-sitting is just plain funny. Excellent chapter; I wish my mother had had an elf to translate baby gibberish for her. She had eight kids, six in six years and REALLY could have used the help!
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  • From MomoDesu on November 07, 2008
    Snape being twisted around the tiny finger of an infant. Priceless; especially her laughter. I love baby laughter, and how insane it can sound, like they are a little evil being in a diaper. It's always too cute though.
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  • From Utopia on November 07, 2008
    The last time I heard a baby laugh was my 5-year-old cousin when he was a tot and puling my hair! I had to go onto youtube:

    http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=iXNnJE6gNEk&feature=related


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  • From smmz79 on November 07, 2008
    yeah great chap i just love severus he is such a wonderful daddy... ooh poor severus and hermione their love life is taking the back burner..... hopefully this night will get them some much needed time.... great chap
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  • From Cliobella on November 07, 2008
    I love it! Of course she has a wicked little laugh, look at her Daddy. I would have been disappointed otherwise. It seems our big bad Potions Master has finally met his match in little Eve. Anyway, I just love this story, Sev is such a sweetie pie!
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  • From catysmom1028 on November 07, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From MariaTeresaQuintanar on November 07, 2008
    Love this story. I can't wait for more.
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  • From Darkless on November 07, 2008
    Wheee!! New chappie. Girl, you rock!
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  • From ANON - Lils on November 06, 2008
    Awww......my heart totally just melted with that last chapter.... :D :D :D
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  • From sweething10 on November 05, 2008
    I haven't been reviewing regularly, but I am thoroughly enjoying this fic. Having Filch make the crib was a nice touch!
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