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Reviews for The Potions Master's Baby

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  • From AriaDragoncrest on November 05, 2008
    I love this story! Then again, I love all of your stories. :D
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  • From starupinthesky on November 05, 2008
    Aww. This is a very well written story and you have kept this reader wanting more.
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  • From on November 05, 2008
    Lovely update. I enjoyed Severus' raw emotions and possessiveness of the baby. Thanks!
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  • From Heidi191976 on November 05, 2008
    A wonderful chapter. It was really nice that Argus made such a lovely gift for baby Eve. I thought it was sweet how Hermione knew what Severus was trying to tell her and admitted that she loved him as well. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From Citten on November 05, 2008
    AH! that was so cute and wonderful! I loved it!!!! well i hope that the next chapter is nice and long because i have a feeling that it will be the ending and i really hate that. :) well i will be watching for the next story when you do post it. :)
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  • From MomoDesu on November 05, 2008
    Such a protective daddy. Snape in love, hehe.
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  • From DracosSlave on November 05, 2008
    Wow... I don't know what to say, really. First of all, I never left a review for any of your stories which I deeply regret. You are an amazing writer, each story better than the last one... Because of you I started reading Lumione fics - and I really wasn't very fond of them. I read every single story of yours and I'm very impressed. Every sentence is perfect, every ending is great, I really don't know what more to say. I just read the new chapter of ‘The Potions Master's Baby’ and I loved it... I'm not into fluff and stuff (ha! It rhymes…), but it was beautiful... Also, I don't like when the characters are even a little OC, but with your stories I don't mind at all. I think you described Severus fantastically in this story and I don't think anyone could do a better job. I can't wait to read more of this fic and many others... I hope you'll write about Eve's life and her love (for example: Scorpius... *sighs*), because I would love to see Severus as a jealous father, who's desperately trying to protect his daughter, lol... but if you don't want to, it's fine... Thanks for publishing your stories and sharing them with us... *hugs*
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  • From ANON - makaem on November 05, 2008
    Severus needs to put her down or he'll have to carry her to kindergarten. My husband held our girls that way, I think he was afraid they weren't real. This is a wonderful story.
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  • From neelix on November 05, 2008
    oh how lovely! I can almost imagine how gorgeous little Eve looks!

    Great update...loving this story still!
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  • From Utopia on November 05, 2008
    New Daddy's do get a tad posessive - especially of a little girl! I have photos of when I was a few weeks old (and still in the premature baby unit); and my Dad is dressed in a lemon yellow hospital gown, a blue strange paper hair net thingy on his head, and covers over his shoes. (He looked a complete and total TWIT) He's holding me (while navigating drip lines, pulse monitors, and goodness knows what else I was connected to by wires and tubes... and he's got the softest facial expression I've ever seen. Well, correction, I saw it again when I picked my wedding dress - he went all soft then too.

    My dad changed nappies around tubes and wires, he bottle fed me, bathed me... he did everything he possibly could before the matron threw him and mum out of the ward because visiting time was over!

    Snape fell in love twice that day - good for him!


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  • From TriniMinx on November 05, 2008
    oh cuteness!
    that wasn't the last chapter, was it?
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  • From ANON - ginnyginny on November 05, 2008
    great chapter. if your new story has a happy ending, i'm sure i can handle the angst!
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  • From voraciousreader on November 05, 2008
    Now I'm all teary from ch. 19! Snape would almost have to be posessive of his child, especially if it were a girl. James Potter is definetly going to get hexed if he even breathes her name in his sleep! LOL.
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  • From smmz79 on November 05, 2008
    wow..... oh i just LOVE severus as a daddy... what a great chap.... i especially love the part where they were lying in bed facing each other, it just seemed so tender!!!!
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  • From diamondmouse on November 05, 2008
    awww that was just adorable! i love how Sev is so protective
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