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Reviews for Letter from the future

By : Narinja
  • From thrnbrooke on November 11, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 5!! Of course she won't think she did wrong!
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  • From tas on November 10, 2008
    I like where you're going with this story, interesting so far, but you REALLY need to get a beta reader to fix things up - grammar and spelling are quite noticeable. Don't mean to put down your story, but it would read a lot better with the corrections. I know any kind of feedback and beta's that I've used in the past were quite helpful. I've learned alot over the years from them.

    Was that all that was in the letter?

    ~tas
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 27, 2008
    Soooo need chapter 4!!!
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  • From bananasforyou on October 26, 2008
    hilarious!
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  • From bananasforyou on October 20, 2008
    more please!
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 20, 2008
    Poor Harry!!! Sooo need chapter 3!!!
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  • From Mystique887 on October 18, 2008
    You really need to ease up on the exclamation marks, I think I counted 14 of them in that chapter. Other than that, I like it.
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 18, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 2!!! What does the letter say? And where is the time turner hidden? Who hid it?
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