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By : GemJewel
  • From danawarner on October 19, 2008
    Anita should like Harry later. It will take time for her to get used to a new person.
    If you know so little about the Anita-verse there's a site that could help: http://www.timber-wolf.net/blake/index.html
    Or you could check wikipedia.
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  • From alma on October 19, 2008
    good chapter!!! I say let Ron be good and Dumbledore think he's doing everything for the greater good.
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  • From angelkitty on October 19, 2008
    oooooo bathroom fun loved it and cant wait to read more
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  • From Secretx3 on October 19, 2008
    Wow, go Asher. Though I always pegged him for the possessive type. Oh, and don't worry about not reading the books. You didn't miss much since the majority of us who have developed good taste in books (and characters) started hating the book some novels in. It turns into a porno, Anita gets a harem, she's on the verge of becoming a Mary-sue and there's just too much Richard-bashing. I mean, give the guy a chance! So... yeah, the fanfics are a hell of a lot better than the actual books (they're more realistic, which is kind of sad). So, my vote goes toward Anita antagonizing Harry, because I would never want them to get along.

    By the way, if you need help with getting facts straight w/o reading the books, go over and check out anitablakewiki.com (i use it so that I don't have to actually read the series to get the characters. It's a very good resource for those of us who hate the series too much to finish it.
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  • From alma on October 19, 2008
    good chapter
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  • From Tourette on October 19, 2008
    I like it and hope to see more soon.
    For the poll: I think Anita shouldn't like Harry.
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  • From Ladyroo88 on October 19, 2008
    I love it!!! More please!!!
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  • From alma on October 19, 2008
    good start, love vampire fics
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  • From AriaDragoncrest on October 19, 2008
    Good story so far. If you're wondering why FF.net deleted your story, if you read the rules of what you can post, Laurell K. Hamilton is one of a short list of authors that asked that stories with her character not be allowed on the site. I am wondering after which anita blake book this is written. Also, you may want to change Harry's age. It would be easy to do at this point. Unless you are going to be extremely AU. Legal age for feeding in LKH world is 18, and anita would kill Asher for feeding on a 15 or 16 year old.
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  • From danawarner on October 19, 2008
    Harry's friends are so gullible. You'd think after 4 years they'd know he doesn't have any other friends.

    BTW: You know, in the Anita-verse it is illegal (at least in the USA) for a vampire to feed off of a minor. Harry can't officially be Asher's pomme-de-sang until 18 (willing or not). Anita would have grounds for an execution order on Asher. She'd hate it but she WOULD kill him. Not even Jean-Claude would risk losing Asher just so he could have a new Pomme.
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  • From Sakya on October 18, 2008
    Let me start by saying that there are not enough AB/HP Xovers... hey, you could post this at Pomme de Sang, maybe it would encourage some of their authors to pick up their fics.

    Oh, yes, the review.

    I love it. I love it. I love it. I can
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  • From Ladyroo88 on October 18, 2008
    More please!!! I love it!!
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  • From Vampirezdarkgurl on October 18, 2008
    Hey, I really like your story so far. I look forwards to reading more.

    Just a note you should change your disclaimer to include that you don't make any money from your stories. If you don't the mods will hide your story until you change it to show a right disclaimer.

    A good one would be: I don't own HP, AB or any of the characters and I don't make any money from my stories.

    Anyway, again, I really like your story and I'm looking forwards to reading the next chapter.

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  • From LadySilver on October 18, 2008
    AWESOME STORY!! I cant wait to read more!!
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  • From smellysocks on October 18, 2008
    It's good... I hope that it picks up soon though...
    Thanks!
    -smelly
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