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By : GemJewel
  • From danawarner on October 18, 2008
    You need to explain better how Harry healed so quickly. You didn't even have Asher splint the breaks in his arm & leg. Broken bones don't heal that fast without help. Either Harry's magic was helping him heal (which would've surprised Asher) or Asher gave Harry some of his vampire blood which could have speeded healing. You should specify.
    You also might have Asher go to the Dursley's to collect Harry's belongings. It might be fun to see Asher confront Vernon. ;-)

    I like the story so far. You just need a few more details.
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  • From hushaby on October 18, 2008
    yay lovly chapter i personally would like to wake up like that!!
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  • From hushaby on October 18, 2008
    good chapter like the slashy parts.... I'M A SLASH WHORE update soon
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  • From hushaby on October 18, 2008
    OOOOH i like this story you reminded me that i really have to update mine
    hope to see more soon
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  • From KaiDragon on October 18, 2008
    First off I find your story a breath of fresh air, truely I do. And the way you portray Harry is just adorable. I hope that you continue to update this story, for I've never read a crossover like this one. Anyway keep up the good work. KaiDragon
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 17, 2008
    There is never enough of AB/HP crossovers, so I just wanted to thank you for writing this fic.
    To tell you the truth, there is not much to review. At least not yet. Good idea, good style, fun to read but at this point, nothing that would make a lasting impression. But I will certainly be waiting for more.
    There is just one problem. In your story Harry is 15, but in Anita Blake universe feeding from minors (even consensual) is a crime and all the main characters in that universe feel very strongly about this. Not to mention that if I remember correctly, it is punishable by death. I'm all for Harry/Asher pairing, I can understand why Harry would consent to a relationship and everything that it entails, but Asher feeding from a minor, not to mention having a sexual relationship with one .. it simple does not compute, not without a good explanation.
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  • From on October 17, 2008
    Im interested...and like to read more.
    I always was intrigued to read Asher/Harry fics... they are so alike and are meant for each other.
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  • From angelnomiko on October 17, 2008
    wow that was awsome, please please update soon . later for now

    angel
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  • From smellysocks on October 17, 2008
    I'm so glad that you put two chapters in here instead of just one because I wasn;'t sure if I would have just reviewed after one chapter... Very glas. Interesting topic, not many people choose to do a crossover with Anita Blake, which is okay, because most of them turn out to be unique (although this one has ripples from that other AB/HP crossover where Asher and Harry are also together- though to your credit, they weren't pomme de sang and master-?- first). I'd like to see where you're going with this and if it will be a PWP or something more. Thanks!
    -smelly
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  • From Slytherdor on October 17, 2008
    Yay! I was reading this on fanfiction when it disappeared.
    I am positively thrilled to see it here.
    Asher is one of my favourite characters.
    I always think that he doesn't get enough attention in the books.

    Please Update Again Soon!
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