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Reviews for Mate-Bonding

By : fan8225
  • From Jacob_Malfoy on March 19, 2013
    the whole page needs to be fixed. I suggest getting a beta
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  • From Mekom on November 10, 2012
    Great story. I love finding good Veela fics. I love how you incorporated passages that Hermione read amongst the action. Only Hermione would be thinking about a book at a time like this. ;)
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  • From UnseenLibrarian on April 04, 2010
    Love this fic, I've read it several times and it is among the best Veela!Draco Mate!Hermione fics I've ever found. Thank you for it!
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  • From mlui on February 07, 2009
    I love the little quotes from the book! Great story! You can never have enough Veela stories, in my opinion. Might you write a sequel?
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  • From margaritama on February 04, 2009
    Hi - was there supposed to be a chapter two?
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  • From Rosamund on February 04, 2009
    Is this a repost? I remember a very similar story from long ago...
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 04, 2009
    "I must not get jealous of a ficitonal character! I must not get jealous of a ficitonal character!"

    DAMN!! It's not working!! That was majorly hot!!! Well done!!
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  • From caseyjarryn on February 04, 2009
    wow! that was great!
    no second chapter? :o(

    xoxo
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on December 02, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From linmo on October 25, 2008
    such a sweet Veela Draco.
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  • From on October 25, 2008
    that was a great story!
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  • From Eilisbelle on October 25, 2008
    I really really really enjoyed this!! I liked how intense it was, with Hermione remembering random 'factoids' to keep her calm whilst dealing with a fully functional male veela. Excellent oneshot!!
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  • From pinkgryffindor on October 25, 2008
    Love it! cute veela fic!!!
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on October 24, 2008
    As an asiraing fanfiction writer. I have been researching how to write a romance novel and how to write emotions in the stories. So far my stuff has been to sterial. After reading that you should 'show' not 'tell' what your character is writing. After reading your one-shot, I can see what they where doing not being told. I exspecually loved how you espressed their fellings and their reactions to each other. I love the thought of the 'watched' marking was not watched. THis is a wonderful story
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  • From Amazoo on October 24, 2008
    This is so GOOD!!!!!!Thank you for writing a veela story!! I was starting to think i was the only one who like them anymore. Especially within the ship of Hermione and Draco!!
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