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Reviews for Pretty Girl

By : StarKneazle
  • From Clare1984 on November 26, 2008
    Now that was a slap! Ooh, all that sexual tension just makes this story sizzle. It's also funny which just makes it such a good read. I am loving this and I have listened to the Ani DiFranco song and I love it, so thanks for that as well. I can't wait to see what happens next. Don't agree with Hermione on one point - Draco should always be naked, no clothes necessary!

    Happy Turkey Day to you! I'm in Scotland and a veggie so I'm totally excluded from the whole turkey thing but enjoy!
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  • From on November 26, 2008
    I love this story.... It has so much more than others!!!!! I just love it!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!! Happy Turkey Day!!!
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  • From ANON - jd on November 26, 2008
    yummy read. wow. please update soon.
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  • From Morgan80 on November 26, 2008
    Yay! Another great chapter. Will be waiting for the next one and happy thanksgiving!
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  • From ANON - Kasri on November 21, 2008
    My god,can you ever not be a brilliant and creative and really, really just too good altogether writer?! You are a /master/, really. The way you can write all the confusing emotions and bring so mny new dimensions to the chracters... It floors me, it really does. Also,Dramione = AWESOME.

    Your loving fangirl, Kasri.
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  • From oliversangel on November 18, 2008
    Oh, I forgot, on your reccomendation I listened to the Ani DiFranco song as I read CH 1, and you're right, it was absolutely perfect, and it made me want to cry. Poor Hermione. I sympathize with her. I was sort of a Hermione in school, bushy curly hair, bookworm, and all. I used to read as I walked from class to class, earning me the nickname 'Belle', ( i was at an awkward stage, glasses, braces, and bushy curly hair. Didn't grow into my looks until after HS) and was probably the only person in the history of my school to get in trouble for reading. And being a Drama geek didn't help either. LOL. So yes, I love that song, it is a perfect anthem for 'Hermione's' everywhere!!!
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  • From oliversangel on November 18, 2008
    This is fantastic love!! I haven't checked yet to see the last time you updated it, but I have confidence you won't abandon it. I know you are busy with school, and all that, and I feel special that you use your free time to create and share such wonderful stories with us. As always, I will wait patiently for updates, education comes first. But I do know that fanfiction is a great stress reliever/sanity restorer. ^.^ XXOO I just Hermione, and Draco, and Lucius, and more recently Severus, but my absolute favorite, is Hermione/Sirius. ^.^ XXOO
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  • From RussianRouletteKiss on November 16, 2008
    I LOVE this story! The way you portray Hermione is very realistic and true to her character and I think Draco is too. I can't wait to see where you take this, please update soon!

    RRK

    Oh, and I listened to the song you posted in the first chapter, it's AMAZING!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on November 15, 2008
    Ch. 2. Ah, so it was about her looks. Nice, I like how they're both tormented by his admission on the tower. hahaha. Go Draco, wank yourself to death. I'm glad he realizes that wanking will only get him so far. She's turning him against all things Slytherin eh? I sense a confrontation and some major angst coming up. I love Hermione's musings as well. there's humor in both of their thoughts which I appreciate considering how conflicted they're both feeling. More please : )
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on November 15, 2008
    OoOO. ch. 1. Me likes....so a secret obsession? Interesting. I like a slightly obsessed troubled Draco and I'm glad that Hermione is equally troubled. Hope they can fix each other : D Now was that last line about her looks or something else I wonder? Nice start...onto ch. 2
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  • From CovenmasterOrion on November 12, 2008
    I have to say your imagery is perfect. Your attention to every detail just makes everything you write that much more enjoyable. I am enthralled with this story already and I hope you continue it. There are just so many great things that can come of this situation. Your story is the first one I have read in a while that just has that thread of intrigue I am really relating to. This situation is similar to the one that brought me and my husband together. Please continue. I will be reading. Thank you.
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  • From bananasforyou on November 12, 2008
    i reallllly love this story!
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  • From ANON - foreverlove on November 11, 2008
    this is a amazing story! I hope you keep writing regularly. its been a long time since there was a story this good, i can't wait for the next chapters.
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on November 11, 2008
    Hi! This is off to a promising start! I hope you will update regularly, I hate when I like something and then it takes forever to get another helping of it =).(yes, I am hinting LOL) Its funny how two people can like each other and never gather up the courage to let the other know. But when they do it can be a very beautiful thing......keep going! lovely story


    Happy Writing!
    S_G
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on November 11, 2008
    It is certainly amazing how two little words can change your life and the perception you have of the people in it. Whether it's They're wrong, I;m Sorry , or I'm here, there is so much meaning packed into it.

    I'm not surprised Draco's initial reaction to her is physical, after all he is a teenage boy, but to have been dwelling on it and wishing that he did not have to act a certain way around her, it is most definitely deeper than that.

    Hermione is as confused as any young girl should be, after all she knows what the students think of her and her worst enemy is telling her that they are wrong when he should be agreeing with them. Talk about a puzzler.....LOL

    These two lost souls need each other to feel complete...I look forward to seeing it happen!

    Brilliant update!!

    Lady B*
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