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By : tana97
  • From cravedom on December 03, 2008
    Aww, Harry is sulking.

    Is Severus able to have talk to anybody about his personal feeling for Harry and his betrayal? Is he even able to see it as such? I noticed he did begged Harry not to give him away; was he stating a preference or just trying to be a good slave?

    OMG, I forgot Severus can get pregnant! What if Ron wants him to carry his baby?
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  • From Leentjef on December 03, 2008
    keep up thegood work and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - luna love on December 03, 2008
    I'm not sure I can get past Ron having sex with Severus, even offscreen. Harry is very OOC
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  • From on December 03, 2008
    Another Great chapter!
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  • From HarryVik on December 03, 2008
    Oh i know harry was an ass, but please make it stop already!!! We get it, He Get it and so.... can we please move on!!!
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  • From mls1971 on December 03, 2008
    love this story!!!!!!!!! i can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 02, 2008
    I'm not gonna lie to you, the more I read your story the sadder it makes me. :(
    I feel so bad for Severus and for Harry. Keep writing, I want to know how it will end.
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on December 02, 2008
    Oh poor Harry I guess the house elves still hasnt forgiven him, damn Charlie fro ruining a good thing for Harry. Cant wait for the rest :D
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  • From ANON - hotary on December 02, 2008
    Wah.... nice, I understand, somehow Harry need to teach a lesson about losing love one, hope you can update every two days, Just hoping...
    thanks
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  • From cravedom on December 01, 2008
    Holly crap! The mean Weasley is scum. Well Harry f*** up big time on this one. However other than the fact that Ron will be the one having sex with Severus, (can we watch?)this is not necesarily bad. But you already know that. Oh, oh; did I already raved about how cute Mimi is? I know house-elves are not very atractive but I can't help to imagine her prety because her personality is wonderful.
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  • From on December 01, 2008
    Another great set of chapters!

    I hope harry gets snape back!
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on December 01, 2008
    Nice!, I'm glad that Charlie is gone but I didnt expect him to have a family already, poor Harry. I do wonder what went between Severus and Hermoine though
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  • From ANON - jadedragon on November 30, 2008
    I am glad that Charlie is out of the way, but please just let this be a sort of punishment for Harry and not something permanent I hate seeing Harry and Sev apart
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  • From ladybluepeach on November 30, 2008
    Wow the only auther in this whole fourm (including me) that updates in a timely fashion..Love it..I got to read two chapter YAY. I liked them both...I was a little upset that the cheating was glossed over, there was no rhyme or reason just cheating and moving on...But I get the whole bad for good thing. Harry took Severus for granted so he lost him. He deserved it. I wounder ho this will effect him (ie. Work, Home, ect.). But I luv it either way and cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - thegrimeaper on November 30, 2008
    I love Ron for opening The Idiot's eyes. The Bastard being married is also interesting (not the usual "he's cheating on you with another guy"). I also feel good about Ron and Hermione keeping Severus with them. Potter doesn't deserve him if he can't take care of him. Keep up good work! :-)
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