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Reviews for Esclavitud *Now Complete*

By : tana97
  • From ANON - Bones on November 30, 2008
    *cries* love it!
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  • From lilpotter on November 30, 2008
    i dislike hermione,ron and charlie. i hope harry get back snape
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  • From Leentjef on November 30, 2008
    WOW VERY GOOD CHAPTER
    AND LET HARRY EARN SEV BACK
    KEEP UP THE GRAET WORK AND POST SOON
    BYE BYE
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  • From ANON - veracityrulesUK on November 30, 2008
    I love how you have portrayed Harry as a 'love-sick' fool for Charlie's charms. It has made a most interesting read. Now hurry up and give me more and be quick about it!
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  • From ANON - ICHIGO on November 29, 2008
    That made me so sad I hope it gets better !
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  • From ANON - HallowsEve on November 29, 2008
    Ok just finished reading from start to chap 10.

    I am crying my eyes out at the moment. Swearing and cursing Harry for being such a asshole. I couldn't believe he could do that to someone. He is just as bad as Snape's old master in my mind.
    As you can see your story has moved me greatly. I freaked out when I saw there was no more to read. I love this as it dom/sub styled story with a twist. Please write the next chapter soon. I am going to be checking everyday for a new post!
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  • From mihoshi on November 28, 2008
    Right now all I want to do is punch the hell out of Potter. Poor Severus. Harry knows he has been through so much and why would he want to be with someone that is so selfish.
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  • From ANON - thegrimreaper on November 28, 2008
    Someone really shoud kick Potter's ass... He is a selfish idiot who trades a few days with **** up his ass for a human being he chose to be responsible for! Idiot...please, please, punish him! *on my knees, begging*
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  • From ANON - linky4u on November 27, 2008
    NOOOOOOO!!!....what
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  • From HarryVik on November 27, 2008
    Ok it is now official. Harry Potter is a dumb as a ass. Kick Charlie out now!!!! Did he forget that Charlie was trying to rape Sev just some weeks before!!! God what an ass.
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  • From ANON - jadedragon on November 26, 2008
    NO NO NO What has Harry done? Why do I think this is some vicious plan by Charlie and Ron... I am seeing bad things happening. Poor Severus, I know Harry is going to regret this
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  • From ANON - Sunday on November 26, 2008
    NO! It doesn't work like that! Charlie isn't good enough for Harry! Take it baaack!
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  • From ANON - AkaneIkeda on November 26, 2008
    Noooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 26, 2008
    I did really like this story, but after that chapter I kind of hate Harry too much to like it anymore, lol, seriously how cruel can he be? I know it's fictional but still, lol.
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  • From ANON - Hotary on November 26, 2008
    Love is blind indeed and I feel sad for Severus.... somehow Charlie is planning thing... that how I feel about this latest chapter.. I wonder what... Good story...
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