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  • From mls1971 on November 26, 2008
    i can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Leentjef on November 26, 2008
    omg harry you are a looser
    and charly is an big bafoen
    keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - fangluver on November 26, 2008
    Wow I luv this story. The characters are OC but still good. I like the plot, Needs more sex...like sex..hehehe. I wonder is Harry is useing those conterception charms (wink, wink). Sev could get pregnant and things could get really sticky. Or Harry could try and try and work and work with Sev. And maybe, just maybe the spell would beak because of the love and nurtuting Harry has given..they get married and Sev. Gets pregnant...I'm sorry I just love happy endings after some much hurt and angst. Can't wait for the next chappy.
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  • From Plaguerose on November 25, 2008
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    Can I kill Charlie? I feel like killing him.
    Maybe smack Harry and smell the coffee...


    I never hated Charlie before, but I hate him in this story.

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  • From ANON - kunitsu on November 25, 2008
    Awwww poor Severus, I wish Harry would just cuddle him. Somehow I get the feeling that Charlie is planning something, I wonder how much of an effect this will have on Harry and Severus's relationship. Cant wait for the next chapter
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  • From cravedom on November 25, 2008
    Arrrg! That friking asshole! Correction those assholes. Do you think Charlie knew? He had to know! I am almost mad enough to not want to read what sexy things he does with Harry. But right after I want them to suffer and Severus to get some justice. He was doing so good!

    I love it when you are mean to the characters ;p
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  • From ANON - Hotary on November 25, 2008
    The story so sweet and beautiful written, great job I must said...
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  • From ANON - Bones on November 24, 2008
    Wonderful! I loved it!
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  • From Leentjef on November 24, 2008
    very very good chapter keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From mls1971 on November 24, 2008
    can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From on November 24, 2008
    Another great chapter!
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on November 24, 2008
    Oh wow that was greast progress for Severus although I am bit worried about that comment Severus made
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  • From Leentjef on November 23, 2008
    very very good story
    keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - arian on November 23, 2008
    This is a wonderful story I hope to see more really soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 22, 2008
    at first i wasn't sure about the premise. just as everyone in the story i was unnerved by snape's helplessness but you are pulling it off in a way that isn't degrading. it's really impressive.
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