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By : tana97
  • From ANON - Fargen on November 12, 2008
    Perfectly !!!
    That you do all PERFECTLY !!!
    I want continuation!!!
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on November 11, 2008
    Well that was unexpected, Charlie being Harrys lover and acting that way. Although I did get the feeling that Harrys lover would want to abuse Severus but not if it was a Weasley. I am glad that Harry didnt let Charlie harm Severus since I am sure that it would have removed all the progress that Harry has made with Severus
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  • From SassyThing on November 11, 2008
    So far I really like this story and I hope to read the next chapter real soon.
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  • From ANON - anon on November 11, 2008
    That was supposed to read "under-sTated," not "under-sated," which might have been a Freudian slip as both are true to this point, never mind that the second is not a real word.

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  • From ANON - anon on November 11, 2008
    Keep going! I'm reading every chapter as soon as it comes out. You're doing a great job with the chapters and the story. I find slave fics some of the most difficult to read; when they're done badly, they're just horrible; yours is very good in an undersated manner that is unusual and rather appealing. Thanks for the story.
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  • From ANON - minn yun on November 11, 2008
    thank you, author. i love this story. i'll be waiting for the next chapter. thank you again.
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  • From ANON - Bones on November 11, 2008
    *Slaughters Charlie* That useless no good SOB!!!!!!!!!!!! How dare he!


    Love this story. *Wipes away tears*
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  • From knj4k4 on November 11, 2008
    my heart loves this story, and this chapter is positively wonderful. i didn't expect it to be charlie it was a nice surprise.
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  • From ANON - luna love on November 11, 2008
    I can't believe Harry would let Charlie humiliate Severus like that, just to make him stay! He said no way to late. I kinda lost my respect for Harry here.
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  • From on November 11, 2008
    I liked it but you made me hate Charlie for this story and how could he do that to Snape!
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  • From Severussgrl on November 11, 2008
    oh! Poor Sev. I don't think I'd like this at all... sure Harry's an amazing guy.. it'd be weird i think. Anyways, this was really good, can't wait to read more :D
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  • From padme82 on November 10, 2008
    Another excellent chapter and once again thank you for the speedy updates. I laughed a bit when I saw your author's notes. Yes, I suppose we readers can be very slash-hungry.

    I enjoyed your Snape in this chapter; how he's regaining a bit more of his personality. Not only is this good for the plot but also for the story and its readers. Snape's character is so very complex, exploring his submissive side (even if a slave fic) is always interesting.

    And excellent job of having Harry still be in love with someone and not able to 'make love' to Snape. This way the relationship doesn't move to fast. Adds a layer of reality. Well, except for the whole 'magic' thing.

    : )

    You know what I mean. Please feel free to respond. Love getting your replies. padme82@yahoo.com

    -- snow
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  • From Visitkarte on November 09, 2008
    Oh, Harry, you moron! The way to the hell is plastered with good intentions.
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  • From mls1971 on November 09, 2008
    loved it!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
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  • From ANON - alientheet on November 09, 2008
    Ahhh the image of snape on his knees begging for release.... please write more soon...
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